Reviews for Debugged
Steven D. Hoskins chapter 2 . 2/24
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Steven D. Hoskins chapter 1 . 2/24
I think that your story has an excellent base to "build" up from (Minecraft pun intended). However, you need to go through your story to revise & edit your grammar and punctuation because I see too many flaws in it. Also, you tend to repeat words (mostly adjectives and verbs) too many times in either the same sentence or several sentences. For example, I think I saw the adjectives "stupid", "little", and I saw the word "freaking" at least four times each in your first chapter. There are more examples, but I don't mean to ramble. I would replace these words with synonyms so that you don't seem too repetitive for REAL editors and publishers to advertise your book (if it were to become something like a New York Times Bestseller). But don't feel so dejected. Just take this review of mine into deep consideration. I'm not saying you have to though. If it makes your work any easier, why don't you write another book, except by using this advise? And don't think of me as insulting you. Think of this as me lending a hand from one author to another...
CR0SSFRE chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
This story is amazing. You're either an excellent writer, or this really did happen.

Oh yeah, and Notch's other game, Wurm Online, is opening a whole new "world". Can you guess what it's called? Xanadu.

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Message from C.S chapter 50 . 4/18/2014
Dead Wes hehe you think your free? Heh well Little Wes your far from free theres more to ancient minecraft than you think :) Il leave you minor details just remeber
In a realm ,you wil find
A secret ,from a miners eye
He wielded a blade ,of bed rock and gold
His eye ,they shine like a silver stone
(Enter my hell You shall meet me in Hellbound)
No this man ,is not herobrine
C.S chapter 50 . 4/18/2014
Message from C.S
Message From C.S

YoU knOw Im actuaLLy greatFul wHen You kIlled hIm and ReveaLed iT To be Your friEnd You ReaLeaSed mE and Im Currently wAiting Fo...r yOu iN The trUe FinA...L *fixes* ancient minecraft world... i expect to be met with the powers of a god slayer and I will not fall so easily expecially since from half of notch's power and half of my fathers... Herobrine but heres a hint you found me... Two eyes shine a gold and a silver as a figure appears standing before your friends an illusion being hanged and burned in this hellish heaven of a "world" named Demonbane
And remember I expect to see you at Demonsbane thats where our fight shall be
C.S
Zorakitty chapter 20 . 8/23/2013
Trust me I know what you can build I have built a budder sword statue made out of actual budder blocks and even a netherrack castle
Zorakitty chapter 12 . 8/23/2013
Wow aurum brain you play kid Icarus uprising as well
Cheezus The God of Cheese chapter 50 . 8/13/2013
Best story I have ever read in my life thanks for sharing.
MastLaryton chapter 50 . 7/1/2013
Dude, I remember when I read this story and I thought it was so damn interesting!
I still remember what I said to myself when Solstice threw you in the lava that time. I thought something like:
"Oh, man, she's SO gonna pay for it!".
It was very interesting, and I totally loved it!
BfheadGamer chapter 9 . 6/24/2013
I get the chapter title. Lol. Jorney to Witch Mountain. Good one.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/10/2013
wow solice is very emotional
Minecraftergirl chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
OK i know this whole thing is so post to be fake, BUT THE DANG WAY YOU MAKE IT SOUNDS REAL! I mean creepers; Check everything not werid; check
Gigatool chapter 45 . 3/27/2013
Why not use Angel's Gate to save Conner?
TheAurumBrain chapter 26 . 3/22/2013
OK, just read Chapter 26. As soon as I saw Aurum, I had to say: I A GOING TO BUILD AURUM. BECAUSE I AM THEAURUMBRAIN
CygnusFang chapter 50 . 3/15/2013
Hey, Howard, and FMP. I want to thank you for finishing this incredible journey for all of us to see. I've been in a coma since the last time I'd spoken to you. I'm through with Minecraft, I never want to see the Starry Sky again. I'll explain it in PM, if asked. This has cheered me up, hearing that you are happy after all this.
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