|Reviews for Frozen Tears|
| rmiser1994 chapter 2 . 6/4
good start :)
if you still need a Beta I don't mind helping - though I mainly do general corrections nothing fancy .
| yuki chapter 2 . 5/30
slash please. will Harry meet MoM? update soon please
| Darkness in shadowland chapter 2 . 5/26
Awesome, please continue!
| alemery chapter 2 . 5/12
I love it already.
| ShionStar chapter 2 . 5/10
SLASH! Definitely SLASH! KYAAAH!
This story seems very promising!
| JIMIRMA chapter 2 . 4/22
Slash please. You made Jack wayyy too cute for it not to be slash.
| Leonette Sarasz chapter 1 . 4/1
Come on! Update please! And make it harry/jack slash! With harry taking care of Jack and being possessive... hehehe...
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/28
Love the story. Please write more.
| Thanasi chapter 2 . 3/2
This has way more potential than a good shit load of stories in this section... I like slash, but it really depends on the author. If you think you can handle it, I say go for it! Anyhow I enjoy the idea, but its too early to see how it will play out. Make sure you upate!
| Kimpatsu no Hoseki chapter 2 . 1/24
Slash! I hope you plan to continue this. You wrote well so I'm sure you need a beta but if you want one I can offer my services.
| Yami no Tsuki chapter 2 . 1/16
I'll beta, if you're still writing this.
I'd say it's too early to make any judgments on the story, apart from 'it's not bad'.
| ArcanePracti-Cat chapter 2 . 1/5
but btw, I don't think I'd vote for reading about a "dom harry" like a previous reviewer suggested... it would turn this into a more fangirl fantasy rather than a fan-made STORY, if that makes sense. sort of a one-dimensional cheap entertainment... That is, I'm just kinda tired of the "perfect powerful dominant grinning crazy arrogant harry" kind of thing, and I'm looking for a bit more substance. ...if he does end up dominant, well, no real issue... but I plead with you, just make sure not to overdo it... :P
But besides that, it IS more realistic if you make them equals in terms of personality. Not only does it show that they actually respect each other as friends, but people's bedroom personalities don't always spill into their everyday lives. It'd be like trying to be in one mood ALL the time- just doesn't really work. xD
just wanted to say that. :D Carry on!
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 2 . 1/5
I think a hint of slash is nice... but not to make relationships the focus of the story, if you get me? But yah, I... vote for slash... ha. :P Like a bromance light-slash kind of, like more hinting at a budding relationship but not having the sappy romance bits, since those don't seem like they'd fit the mood of this setting? Perhaps a bit of dark humor, and of course chaos... hahaha xD
Seems like it's been a while, but it looks promising... maybe you'll make something else of this someday. :D neat!
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 1/5
...WHOOOOAHHH... so hooking! xD I'm hooked!
dang, only 2 chapters tho. :P
| BloodDDB chapter 2 . 11/25/2014
It's an intereting idea. I hope you update soon, I really like unique fic, and I consider this one intersting. :)