Reviews for Worn Out Faces
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
VioletCamellia chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
so sad...although nicely is definitely one of my favourites!
Caelitea chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Wow. I I love this so much; I love the darkness and the angst, as well of the flow of this fic. The imagery is great; I really enjoyed the very first lines that describe White, it's so lovely and haunting. Dark/angsty fics are my favorite, haha; I don't know, just the aspect of White going insane (or Black too technically, I suppose) because of power/fame is so interesting. I love how you wrote this; the line "He's still holding her hand when she jumps" is so perfect and tragic, as well as the overall tone of the fic, and the mix of slight lightheartedness/sarcastic humor mixed with chilling/ghostly lines is so well done. The mention of Rosa and White saying "she's not anyone's valiant savior. She didn't do anything." really shows how fed up White is with all this publicity in an almost cruel way, since she speaks of donating her hair sarcastically. And when Black starts crying and doing all these things to try and stop her, it's so heartbreaking and tragic but in a way, you kind of have to admire White's resolve, sad as it is.
Ahhh I'm so terrible at leaving reviews and I definitely overused the word "love" here, but seriously, this was so well written and I'm jealous at what you did under 1,000 words! I've been rereading it for a while trying to think about how I want to express my feelings but I'm still kind of failing, haha. But this was a wonderfully haunting fic, and I look forward to reading more of your writing!
Basse Cerise chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This is awesome o-o

So creepy and weird, but still so majestic and awesome and entertaining...

Like some sort of dancing tutu-wearing zombie quadricorn.

... Yeah, I'm just gonna go now.
Inactive ONNMT chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
just whoa...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
why do you hurt me in this way

(A more coherent review later, fantastic work.
RedWarrior702 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Very angsty, I like it. The way you wrote it really lets the reader know what's going on in her head and all the pain.
I hope to see more from you soon. Keep it up!