|Reviews for split ends|
| thehazeleyedloser chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
so sad; so full of love. your writing, the way you use it here, is absolutely flawless. characterisations are on point, allowing a reader to hold on to the emotions shining through. i love the similes used because it adds to the piece. it's truly beautiful. the title is entirely metaphorical, but literal. what does one do with with split ends? throw them away. gone. and that is exactly what rapunzel is doing, y'know. it's amazing.
you've created a masterpiece. i love it so much. well done. in such a word count, too. brilliant! utterly perfect. (favourite).
| ILoveWillRiker chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
This is so sweet. :). Tangled stories really should all be innocent like this. It is a Disney movie after all...
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Aww... so sweet! Wonderful job.