|Reviews for Wisp Christmas Outtake|
| reader83 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Wisp standing on her own two feet sure is something! Such a great holiday for them!
And don't worry, your Christmas chapter was absolutely perfect. It wasn't over the top like some, this was perfect for these characters and this story.
| jbwebb chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Omg. Soooooooo. Sweet!
| slc6548 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Such a very sweet outtake! This was wonderful! Thanks for writing!
| kelmikmag chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
WOW-what a wonderful chapter!
| looie chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Gahhhhh gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous. This was just lovely :)
| idealskeptic chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Holy crow! I just bawled happy tears. That, my friend, does not happen often.
But I saw in the new Wisp chapter that this comes first so I read it. I almost didn't. But I did. I think I may have to read it again.
Christmas in fiction and fan-fiction can be so silly and overdone, much as Christmas is in real life, but you made it meaningful and beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this.
| RingTheBella chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
that was great, especially the standing/walking. What a surprise!
| Zandriin chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
'Wisp' completely consumed me for days...so when I ran out of chapters I headed to your profile to read the outtakes. This one made me smile through tears, sobby hot tears. This story is amazingly well written and compelling and simply beautiful. I am amazed that you do not have a firm outline for this story given how intense the story is. And I just want to say "thank you" for sharing your story with us.
| aqua-love-angel-13 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Aw Merry Christmas..haha...this ones good too!)
| sillyvamp chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Very sweet. :)
| anicacullen chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I can't believe I missed this post! I'm happy that Wisp's Christmas went very well. Loved that she attempted to walk. Also, I want to see Pet with the tiny antler, hehehe :) She probably looked so cute! Thanks for making this outtake! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
| sujari6 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
| AmayaBlack chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
By far in my opinion the best outtake of this story yet!