Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Superb probably the best scene I ever read and I have been reading BDSM for over 20 years. FreeDomsong
janet chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
I love your style and imagination. if anyone has a bad word to say about your stories then they just don't get what it's all about and therefore are unable to properly appreciate your talent. can't wait for your next installment:))
RezMa chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
I LOVED IT! I also so really love your writing style! I'm can not wait for the next installment...
izlovezvampires chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Oh my! Wow, that was fun.
Melany333 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Loved this
hurstygirl chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Well, well, well...aren't I the cat that just got the cream, Kitties cream no less! You are seriously damaging my knickers, it really must stop...oh, c'est la vie. Why aren't you getting published? Honestly lady, I'm not getting anything even remotely this irresistable on my Kindle. I'd pay good money for you. You are a delight to read, use excellent descriptives and observations and you keep me gripped and drooling (do I actually breath?)To the very end...and your harpies, just unique! You never bore, youare delciously inventive and not at all formulaic, as many naughty stories can be. Be brave, get out there and let more of the ladeez sample your wares. They deserve you. X fellow middle aged London mum...we're still rockin it!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
gadberry1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
good heavens. that was a hell of a ride. Good on you, thanks very much. The Klu Klux Klan reviewers need to stick to K and T rated stories. I have to say I am surprised FF has let this remain on their site, however. TWCS, yes, but FF seems more restrictive. Whatever, thanks again.
casejbridges chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Holy cow I was gripped to my seat reading this. How on earth do u manage to up the ante? This was way hotter that hot.
I wonder what else u have hidden away in ur mind. Lol.
Brilliant as always so are by far my favourite Author.
Big hugs n lots of luvv as always xx
megasam chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
lgk chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I thought it was great because he worked within her limits (and his) but pushed her as well knowing she would be nervous at first until she was able to sort through everything. He also repeatedly made sure that she was "green" and comfortable which is exactly as things should be handled. And look how it ended - she enjoyed the whole scene immensely as did he!
AdonicaSS chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Your outtakes have been on my TBR for so long - I finally got family back to work and school and took a vacation day. Hooray! Dove in and read for most of the day...inbetween laundry and playtime and calls from my mom, of course *eyeroll*

I love that they have expanded their relationship beyond their safe limits. Totally believable - and wow oh wow is Bella good at what she does. I miss the kitties in this story (they are my favorites) but there was plenty of meowing and yowling and hissing to make up for it. LOL

I love your long chapters and incredible detail. When I fall into bed, I sometimes read your words for maybe 5-10 minutes, just to go to bed with a smile on my face. I'm warning you though, love, if my brand new kindlefire bursts into flame I'm blaming you!

Chicbetty chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Finally have a chance to catch up on my reading after the holidays, and wow! I couldn't of asked for more! That was BEYOND HOT! It had me squirming right along with Bella. I love that she was so turned on by another woman...and that Edward was beside himself from it as well...perfect.

Amazing job, Vicky! Though you say this is AU of sort, the way you reference interaction and events can't help but make it feel like a real fastforward. It may take this long to get over her insecurities enough, but can totally see it.
Moltz chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Was Alice the other submissive?
I'm surprised Bella was able to hold in a secret like her predilection for watching lesbian porn. Is that a punishable offence?
Will the other submissive's Mistress be privy to the viewing of the days events to observe her pet losing control at the ministrations of Bella?

Nice to see that over a year and a half together with Edward has given Bella the confidence to know how to shut the harpies up.

Good out take.
FreeSpiritkaren chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Loved it, and read on New Years Eve, needless to say my panty is wet... Lol
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