Reviews for The Beast Within
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 7 . 5/17/2016
I forgot to ask what the hell does Nico day
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 8 . 5/17/2016
Ok this was good not one of my favorites it seemed like it was off and stuff from there others I read and like but its still good though I thought Nico and Percy should have been different a bit and the way you have Nico Percy Leo Hazel and Frank together doesn't seem to fit as perfect as I thought and hoped not that it isn't a good story
frozenheartofdarkness chapter 8 . 9/13/2015
This was totally adorable! And smutty at the same time...but really adorable too. And it had a nice supernatural turn from the usual Percy Jackson stories. A great story! ;D
Cheshieru chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Am I the only one kinda unsatisfied with this? Cuz it's just like, Percy turns into a wolf and Nico tells him that he was supposed to be a hunter... And then they have sex. The smut was awesome, as always, but it's just like "Oh I was supposed to be an important hunter like my father? Okay let's have plotless smut." :I just saying
Miss Emotion chapter 8 . 12/27/2014
OMG *blush* There were some really cool moments in this like when Percy was angry saying "ruined my life" Also hahahaha they fucked happily ever after XD Hahahaha Hazel
Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Shadow of the Angel chapter 8 . 12/13/2014
Damn. More sexy time. And Eight pups total. EIGHT AND MORE TO GO!
Shadow of the Angel chapter 6 . 12/13/2014
A lot of 'sexy time' in this chapter. A LOT.
Shadow of the Angel chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Gosh. There are so many stories to read! But I love finding a story written by you that I haven't read before (even if it was written a few years ago). Keep up the work. I love your stories!
3646 chapter 3 . 11/23/2014
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 8 . 10/23/2014
... my mind is completely blank. You know there is SO MUCH you could have done with this, it's a shame really but otherwise okay
Wolf154657 chapter 8 . 9/12/2014
XD cute
Rhaps0dy chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
Rhaps0dy chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
THIS IS D.A.M.N H.O.T! MY goodness! I can only say it is ABSOLUTELY SUPER DUPER FREAKING FANTASTICALLY WONDERFULLY HOT! NICE WRITING! SUPER CLEAR DESCRIPTION, I especially like the part where Leo & Percy were making out with each other! I could totally imagine how it looks like and IT IS HOT!
BenjyLovesCloud chapter 8 . 2/8/2014
Shoulda had the Percy-Leo sex
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