|Reviews for The Beast Within|
| BenjyLovesCloud chapter 8 . 2/8
Shoulda had the Percy-Leo sex
| Jess-love95 chapter 8 . 1/20
Oh yes it pleased me, this is so f***ing hot ! I love it ) And I'm happy that they fucked happiy ever after ! And that eveyone is reunited thanks to the pups ! Your story was great, as usual !
| Jess-love95 chapter 7 . 1/20
Wow, this was like super hyper hot, I like The dom/sub bond and also the bond bewteen Percy and Leo, it's so cuuute !
| Jess-love95 chapter 6 . 1/20
The sex was amazing !
I wonder what will happen with the old vampires, and also with Octavian ?
It's a pity Percy lost his capacity as a hunter, he would be so powerful if he had both ! (wolf an dhunter qualities)
I'm glad Percy can acutally rebel against Chares even if he is the Alpha, I would hate to see him submit to someone other than Nico !
| Jess-love95 chapter 5 . 1/20
Okay,I love Silena and Charles, and I understand what they did and why, but I'm happy that Percy doesn't want to listen to them, it would be very weird if he was forgiving while they "ruined his life" even if we know they didn't, they could have !
And, mmmmh, slutty!Percy and slutty!Leo ;p
| leo's girlfreind chapter 8 . 1/4
very dirty and so disqustingly amazing
| OnlyChangeISConstant chapter 8 . 11/3/2013
Wow... *loses coherence*...
The subs O.O O.O ,the pups *squeals* and LukeXOctavian in the mix... How do you this? Bring out the most deliciously sinful concoctions each time? o.O
| FReeTOBeMe1311 chapter 8 . 10/15/2013
OMG I JUST REREAD THIS LAST CHAPTER AFTER READING "CHASING FIREFLIES" AND JUST... RACHEL FUCKING KNOWS EVERYTHING!
| AnimeAngelChick chapter 8 . 10/7/2013
Great story! I loved it! U have to right more stories like this!
| lookingthroughthemirror chapter 8 . 10/3/2013
oi I bloody loved this story mate
| She with the hazel eyez chapter 8 . 10/2/2013
This is a gem. It is like the pornyist(?) thing you will probably ever find in this fandom and I love it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
That was adorable! I love how you made Leo and Percy so close and made the wolves and vampires be friens in the end. And the cubs, I wanted to h ug them so bad! Fantastic story!
| PicturePerfectPassion chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
That was beautiful :')
| KitkatMoon chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
Ending is was awesome
| Secret Moon Princess chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
It was soo cute! And good. And I don't know, but I think you got me shipping Luke and Octavian. Yay!