Reviews for Druids in Camelot
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 11 . 8/8/2013
For some reason I feel like you just relaved to much at the same time but I just hope in the next chapter you can play it off well
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 10 . 8/8/2013
God I feel like this was all to soon and I just hope that arther does not lay a single hair on percival
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
I'm a percival lover and all that I can say is bravo that story was halarious if the other love can't understand comedy and get mad then that's just stupid but that story of William I just wonder why Michael did that god
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 8 . 8/8/2013
God it's like you have completed my dreams stories about percivals past here I come
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 7 . 8/8/2013
God percival is not only sweet, nice, strong and drop dead gorgeous but now he has freaking magic dude have much better can he get
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 6 . 8/8/2013
WHAT THE HELL WHY WOULD SHE DO THAT DAMN IT GOD IF PERCIVAL OR RACHEL IS HURT I WILL KILL SARAH GOD WHY WOULD SHE DO THAT GOD
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
awwwwww... awwwwwww... god but how can this be if sarah and percival are brother and sister shouldn't percival be a druid also
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 4 . 8/8/2013
oh god i wonder if her brother is Mordred
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
great chapter :D
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
haha...oh gwaine with his flirting and such
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
this chapter started out great can;t wait till i read the rest :)
don't-even-ask1 chapter 17 . 5/23/2013
This story was amazing! Glad to see someone draw Gwaine down even if it's just a fanfic! Wonderful!
Daybreak96 chapter 17 . 5/14/2013
Great story love it!
AnotherMerlinFan chapter 17 . 5/11/2013
This story was great :)
BrinaLilly chapter 17 . 5/2/2013
Your concept for the story was good, changing the parts of the story that result in a tragedy. You spread yourself a little thin with your first story trying to follow two different couples. The story contained more dialogue than description, but you have to be careful with that because readers may lose interest if it is all description. I don't want you to feel like I am bashing your writing or your story, believe me when I say that I enjoyed it, especially the humor of it. As you keep writing you need to remember that even though you can picture everything, your reader may not. There needs to be more to the story and more behind people falling in love, if only it were that easy. Its a great start so keep writing. :) You'll get the hang of it. Took me years to write as I do now, and I still have a long way to go. You're a good writer, don't let anyone tell you otherwise!
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