Reviews for New In Town
Penny Lu chapter 15 . 12/28/2015
Wow I loved this story! Short and sweet though funny and interesting.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2015
Did I already say sam and tucker are HYPCRITES? as half ghost they loved him, and now he's a full ghost they say he is evil. THEY ARE HYPOCTITES
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
woah Sam&Tucker are hypocrites!
Anon chapter 5 . 11/22/2015
You mentioned Danny's ghost half in the authors note, I thought he was full ghost now?
Anon chapter 3 . 11/22/2015
A very nice story so far! Other than the OCness at the beginning (I know it's an AU, but really the beginning could have worked with one characters personality changed), but I know this will be hard to fix so my advice is "show don't tell"! Try SHOWING the readers that Danny is a lot stronger, instead of going into a monologue about it! You'll find it keeps their interest a lot better, and helps immerse them into the story. I'd do this by getting him to fight a stronger enemy - Vlad, perhaps (he'd want to stop Danny from leaving after all, or maybe even get him to return)
Itharax chapter 15 . 5/21/2015
Love it! Great!
ElizabethBathog chapter 15 . 5/1/2015
Great story! :)
LunarCatNinja chapter 15 . 4/27/2015
*Snicker* This is hilarious and wonderful! On wards to the sequel! *Heads off to read the next story*
Totalfangirl01 chapter 15 . 11/19/2014
XD I really, REALLY loved this story :3
So funny :P
Needsalife69 chapter 15 . 7/29/2014
Absolutely loves the store so far it would be great if u could add more chapters
Tristi Lynne chapter 15 . 5/18/2014
great story the ending made me laugh quite a bit lol
Darkestshadow Brightestlight chapter 15 . 4/9/2014
Cute story.
Oblitus Angeli chapter 6 . 3/19/2014
I would be the only one clapping at a poetry reading.

1) can't snap if my life depended on it.
2) believe no.1 I really can't. Except for this one time, but no one was
ali-awake to witness it.
3) I really can't snap.
4) eh, that's bout it...
Oblitus Angeli chapter 2 . 3/19/2014
Good morning day Sorry I’m not there But all my favourite friends Vanished in the air It’s hard to fly when you can’t even run Once I had the world, but now I’ve got no one If I needed someone to control me If I needed someone to hold me down I would change my direction And save myself before I If I needed someone to control me If I needed someone to push me around I would change my direction And save myself before I drown….drown Good morning day Sorry you’re not here All those times before We’re never this unclear It’s hard to walk when you can’t even crawl Once I had this world, but now I’ve lost it all...

I dunno, these lyrics just remind me of this story...

I love this story so far, btw.
CorvoKuro chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
Wow... this is one of the best stories on the site, it's all perfect. All have to say is amazing job, Clockwork's Apprentice.
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