|Reviews for New In Town|
| Itharax chapter 15 . 5/21
Love it! Great!
| ElizabethBathog chapter 15 . 5/1
Great story! :)
| LunarCatNinja chapter 15 . 4/27
*Snicker* This is hilarious and wonderful! On wards to the sequel! *Heads off to read the next story*
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 15 . 11/19/2014
XD I really, REALLY loved this story :3
So funny :P
| Needsalife69 chapter 15 . 7/29/2014
Absolutely loves the store so far it would be great if u could add more chapters
| Tristi Lynne chapter 15 . 5/18/2014
great story the ending made me laugh quite a bit lol
| Darkestshadow Brightestlight chapter 15 . 4/9/2014
| Oblitus Angeli chapter 6 . 3/19/2014
I would be the only one clapping at a poetry reading.
1) can't snap if my life depended on it.
2) believe no.1 I really can't. Except for this one time, but no one was
ali-awake to witness it.
3) I really can't snap.
4) eh, that's bout it...
| Oblitus Angeli chapter 2 . 3/19/2014
Good morning day Sorry I’m not there But all my favourite friends Vanished in the air It’s hard to fly when you can’t even run Once I had the world, but now I’ve got no one If I needed someone to control me If I needed someone to hold me down I would change my direction And save myself before I If I needed someone to control me If I needed someone to push me around I would change my direction And save myself before I drown….drown Good morning day Sorry you’re not here All those times before We’re never this unclear It’s hard to walk when you can’t even crawl Once I had this world, but now I’ve lost it all...
I dunno, these lyrics just remind me of this story...
I love this story so far, btw.
| CorvoKuro chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
Wow... this is one of the best stories on the site, it's all perfect. All have to say is amazing job, Clockwork's Apprentice.
| yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 15 . 12/2/2013
really liked this and hope theres a sequel!
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
how come it says white with black tips in the first chapter and black with white tips in the second one
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/29/2013
All the best thing ever
| PeytonBlackTheOriginal chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
I love how in the beginning, you had said that you have an ADHD way of writing, because I do too! I love your story!
| Inviso-Al chapter 15 . 7/23/2013
I read 'balance' again and I realized that you tied in this story and that story, cool! But when does all of that stuff happen to Dani/Kris?