|Reviews for Poor Unfortunate Souls|
| iloveyugiohGX93 chapter 1 . 2/5
This story hasn't updated since 2012. And it's 2015 now. Either you update this story now, or delete it. This site doesn't have room for unfinished stories.
| vivian chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
I have a feeling you had a lot of ideas and not much patience... Because this fic is EVERYWHERE! Seriously, one minute casual rape, the next a serious development in zeph's condition, then more less-casual rape, then no-fucks given pregnancy without any impact...
I loved it.
But still... this would have been amazing if you had taken longer on it. With pacing and some multiple chapters, this could have been a real gem. Nice work xx
| Rose Suicidal chapter 1 . 2/11/2013