Reviews for Loveless
Wayang.Silver chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
*Clap clap. Nice interpretation on Genesis and Angeal's relationship as friends (even most of us know it's an odd one). You've done well to show how Genesis and Loveless are inseparable. :)

Saya nggak akan terlalu menyinggung soal terjemahan dari teks Loveless (karena lebih ke sastra). Hanya yang saya merasa janggal saat membaca bagian akhir dimana Angeal mengakatakan: "Aku telah mengangkatmu menjadi SOLDIER Kelas Satu."

Mungkin lebih tepatnya seharusnya: "Saya telah merekomendasikan kamu menjadi SOLDIER Kelas Satu."

Soalnya dalam game aslinya dia bilang: Angeal: "I've recommended you for 1st."

Sedangkan versi Jepang ia mengatakan dalam terjemahannya: "I've nominated you for 1st."

Kalau dalam militer, 'mengangkat' ibaratnya seperti menaikan pangkat langsung. Padahal yang berhak mengangkat pangkat adalah Lazard. Sedangkan untuk naik ke Kelas Satu, seseorang SOLDIER biasa perlu rekomendasi/nominasi dari SOLDIER Kelas Satu.

Truthfully I don't really see Angeal OOC here, because even in the game we see little of the times he's with Genesis as friends (and that's without being affected by the degradation). The only clue we do have about such an interaction is from Angeal's Fan Club SMS about the two talking about how Angeal likes his plants and Genesis hates bugs. What I see, is your interpretation of Angeal how he would react to Genesis and his Loveless quoting - so, fair game.

Overall an enjoyable fic that relates to canon. :) Just watch out how you interpret some lines from the original game and you're doing a great job.

- W.S