Reviews for 20 Kisses
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 8 . 2/1/2013
Well I had been hoping for somehting more along the romantic lines but this one was cute too. I really liked how Fai stayed with her until she fell asleep. :)
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 7 . 1/12/2013
*grins* oh I love this! although I'm not sure if it is customary in Japan to kiss on the hand or not (seems more like the western tradition to me, but it could probably just be me _; )
Tomoyo getting jealous over the thought of Kuro liking someone else was hilarious and the way Kuro dealt with it was rather nicely done as well. Great job. Now I eagerly await the FaiSaku one.
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 6 . 1/8/2013
Awwww... Its weird but I never did imagine those two as a couple and even if it weirds me out, I can see it making a strange sort of sense too. Xing Hou and Fei Wang could be taken as a pale reflection of Yuuko and Clow, no?
Oh and I'd love it if you could write a KuroTomo oneshot here. That'd be really great. and a FaiSaku one too (probably in Infinity if you can come up with something)
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
Oh I absolutely love this one. No one has ever tried to write a scene showing how it all ha begun and I must say this is just perfect! :D
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
Poor Kurogane seemed to have been scarred for life. Thought I should point out a mistake in your omake thingy _; Fai can't use healing magic as he has said so himself and it's shown in his memories in Celes as well when Ashura tells him he can heal people through his smiles.
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Awww... those two are so cute together *_* I think I'll be putting this story on my alert list. ;)
P.S. LOVED the omake xD
Justice Tokidoki chapter 6 . 1/3/2013
Ugh, this was hard to read only because I despise Fei Wang Reed so much.

But besides that, I thought it was good actually. Your descriptions throughout all of these has been really splendid and it adds a lot of substance given how short these are.

Great work, I know it hasn't been easy. Short oneshots are hard. Congratulations on reaching this far though.
Justice Tokidoki chapter 5 . 1/3/2013
Very sweet and sad, hmmm, it's a very pivotal moment for the tsubasa/XxxHolic universe.

Very sad and touching, though for some reason I have a hard time imagining Clow crying.

Great oneshot again!
Justice Tokidoki chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
Very cute as well, though I don't know this couple very well.

I liked how the servants watched the couple at the end.
Justice Tokidoki chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
Ha ha, this one was cute. I like how Syaoran feels bothered by seemingly nothing at the end.
Justice Tokidoki chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
ha ha, this is one of my favorite parts of the manga, when everyone gets drunk in Outo except for a very sour Kurogane.

This was very accurately and humorously portrayed, and I can see it all happening actually.

The kiss in question brought in a very surprising reaction from kurogane. Ha ha, I hope he's alright.

Great oneshot here.
Justice Tokidoki chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Wow, this was really cute. I love how you described this little scene, with Sakura's flowing clothes and Syaoran's blush. Very sweet moment between the two. :)

Touya's reaction was funny, though it's sort of harsh that he talks about killing syaoran. Man, he's only eight? Well, older brothers will be older brothers