|Reviews for Between the End and the Beginning|
| Dare mo chapter 11 . 19h ago
Hey! il primo è meraviglioso come...
Agg!Today I don't want to write in italian. it's raining and holidays are almost in the end , it depresses me!
Hey! first, it's wonderful the way that you change the roles, and still they are themselves.
besides that, i was re read this chapter last week, and after see the doujinshi of Time-King / Zeitdieb, I got a doubt. So, i'm here to do an stupid questions (any of the both of you, please, reply meee!)
eeeh, fine: Mephisto has his curl, Amaimon his cone /broccoli...why demon-Shiro don't have any weird protuberance on his head? or that is something that only the members of Royal Demon Family have?
oh...wait a second!
(after wake up in the hospital)
ahahahahahahaha! you should see shiro with Mephisto's curl!kyahahahaa... i'm going away before i could see Shiro with a cauliflower, like special style hair.
aha...anyway, give me an answer, please
| XxAlysxX chapter 18 . 3/6
xxxxxx to xxxx Shiro xxxx you...? Now I'm interested. I want you to win. I want you to so win now as much as I want Mepphy to win, I want you to win right now. Also are those "x's" the correct number of letters for the word or is it different number of letters because 6 letters is a little short for anything sexual so that's out.
Mepphy is the master of making you think of things you really don't want to and you'll love and alternately hate him in the same breath.
Special relations with Mepphy, eh? So Mepphy is just a teacher to Shiro for them...? They're not entirely wrong but...special relations indeed.
Also Father Igarashi, he gets his jollies in a different form towards Mepphy.
| Fox Populi chapter 18 . 3/5
Not sure which is funnier, the actual chapter or your dialogue with Mephisto :P
| tarballGZ chapter 18 . 3/4
Hearing Mephisto mention me makes me giddy. Even if offhand.
Dear Mephisto: Haven't you ever heard of Rule of Drama? You must be an avid troper, of course you have!
Think of it this way. Dear guest, you listen too. Maybe it's -my- universe with -my- rules that you were transferred to? That's what gave you those new powers. After all, it was my -begging- that allowed this story to happen.
In my fics, you'll be able to do such...and a hell of a lot more. In fact, you WILL do that in a oneshot I plan to write. :D And what you do to poor Shiro-pon there...well, I might as well put you in that Konata costume right now.
| Fireminer chapter 18 . 3/4
At least Fujimoto never gave his sons advice about woman. Or partner in the whole.
And that is quite an amusing comparision.
Hey, could you do one chapter for both Samael and Fujimoto go camping and telling scary stories to each other? In the middle of a space-time void?
| Miyavilurver chapter 18 . 3/4
I am in the middle of hysterical laughter. I've been missing your works, they're my favorite brand of addiction, and seeing an update from you made me grin so widely. I was not disappointed (not like I ever am, you're amazing). I can just imagine this happening so well! Love how the priest was bemoaning about Mephisto too xD
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/4
So. Before I start, let me just say your writing is godly. And the way you characterize Mephisto... I am mind blown.
However, there's one thing that been bugging me about their trip to the past. Wasn't Samael not able to have anyone dead be alive when he time travels? Dot get me wrong, I loved reading about Rin getting to know his old man better but I'm still confused...
| Dare mo chapter 17 . 1/31
PS: I was thinking that for a while:
"Did you ever wonder why there is an angel by the same name as I? Why the legends in the scriptures speak of angels that n proupus'turned wicked' and became demons?"..."give humans what they want. We've been cursed and worshipped by you for as long as man has lived on earth, under different names in different times: angels, demons, gods ."
Is this another allusion of yours? I mean, that sound a little similar to the monologue of Mephistopheles in the end of "Faust". you know...
...it's completly impossible to me translate this into english, or even italian. So...is in spanish, i'm sorry and... good luck!
"MEPHISTOPHELES: Ahí llegan con toda hipocresía esos mozuelos. Así nos han arrebatado a alguno, luchan contra nosotros con nuestras propias armas. Ellos también son diablos, pero enmascarados (...) Nos tacháis de espíritus réprobos cuando vosotros sois auténticos brujos, pues seducís al hombre y a la mujer."
You did this on purpose?
| darkmickyangel chapter 17 . 1/27
truly can't be unseen. and i don't think here in america most people understand the Hebrew connotations of the bible. if it gets translated into another language it's usually Latin.
| Dare mo chapter 17 . 1/24
Angeli e demoni sono come le lumanche?! Oh, ora capisco perchè molte culture usano sale nei rituali di purificazione. xD ( dubito che un cerchi di sale sia sufficente per mantenere fuori a Mephisto)
Samael è nel corpo di un maschio, vero? Dove nasconde il suo secondo “piede”, mi chiedo?
Angels and demons are like slugs?! Oh, now i understand why many cultures use salt in the rituals of purification. xD ( I doubt that a circle of salt was sufficient to keep out Mephisto.)
Samael is in the body of a male, isn't he? Where he hidden his second "feet", I wonder?
| Chopsticks89 chapter 17 . 1/24
| Fireminer chapter 17 . 1/23
Somehow, you've been playing with words recently. Not a bad thing, though.
| Fox Populi chapter 17 . 1/23
I will love you forever for this. You even mentioned the slugs.
And if Shiro were alive today I bet he'd enjoy that one South Park episode where Cartman starts a reli-rockband...
"We just take things like daaaarling and baaaaaby and replace them with Jeeeeesus..."
"I want to get down on my knees and start pleasing Jesus. I want to feel his salvation all over my face..."
| ProbableImpossibilities chapter 17 . 1/23
Oh man... maybe Shiro needs a better translation? Mine just comes right out and says stuff like "had sex with." No confusion with the NIV. XD
This chapter was so funny, though. Shiro reminds me of those kids who go flipping through the Bible just to look for X-rated stuff and get a giggle or two, and Mephisto intentionally fanning the flames of the joke is just hilarious. I was reading this while walking across some ice, so I'm not exaggerating when I say that this had me rolling around on the ground laughing. XD
| Fox Populi chapter 13 . 1/23
Oh thank you thank you THANK YOU xD