Reviews for When the Odds are Against You
Guest chapter 54 . 7/28/2013
Loved it. Brilliant :] Update soon.
HungerGamesQueen100 chapter 54 . 7/28/2013
I had fallen behind in my reading of this but I am glad I caught up - once more brilliant chapters that kept me thoroughly enthralled. You have a brilliant way of answering one thing in a chapter but before the chapter is out I will have a whole new bunch of questions that will have me impatient for the next chapter. Currently such as what is Haymitch up to? And then there is the mystery POV from earlier still? I liked the introduction of the other tributes at the end there, and even though it was only a glimpse, I can't wait to see how you expand on them, and I think it will be interesting.
- Keep up the good work
Tiffany.
Megan chapter 30 . 6/9/2013
Well at least he's not trying to ruin her life, and he seems like he loves her... altough theres still the games.
Megan chapter 29 . 6/9/2013
Kinda mean, I like Frenkin he's like the perfact kid-brother I'll never have... but someone has to go.
Philippa chapter 49 . 5/20/2013
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! He was going to fall for her, I knew it!
Philippa chapter 48 . 5/12/2013
I LOVE. Are you planning on introducing any other tributes? I think it would be exciting if another tribute got caught up in her mess while she's in the arena, but it's your story, don't change it XD
Guest chapter 16 . 5/7/2013
really interesting! You have a good sense of drama
theluckypasta chapter 46 . 4/20/2013
Awesome!
Philippa chapter 46 . 4/13/2013
There it was again. Another chapter that made me cry :'( Does Frenkin tell them it's his birthday? Don't answer that, I want to know in the story :P
Philippa chapter 45 . 4/13/2013
This chapter made me cry. I'm not joking, I am crying as I write this review. This is such a beautiful chapter :')
HungerGamesQueen100 chapter 46 . 4/13/2013
Another touching chapter; the portrayal of raw emotion was excellent, had me a little choked up I must admit. Keep up the good work!
-Tiffany
HungerGamesQueen100 chapter 45 . 4/7/2013
Very heart-touching account of Frenkin's views on things. I particularly liked the added details of the cupcake and it being his birthday as it reminded us that Frenkin is just a boy. Nice work :)
Tiffany
Philippa chapter 44 . 4/5/2013
I am so sorry you had to go to the trouble to write that explanation for me, but thank you so much for cleaing it up. I have a feeling I know who the mystery POV is, but I am not gonna say that person so I don't spoil it. :P
HeartfeltSorrow14 chapter 44 . 4/4/2013
Yep I'm a new viewer to your story! Hi! I have to say, I adore your work and I'm really enjoying reading when you update! I have gone through and read all the chapters, because it's pointless starting at the most recent chapter. What I like most about your story is that you've got Haymitch's character perfect. Usually I'm against OCs with characters from the book but you've portrayed him so well that I feel you've got him almost perfect with the Haymitch Collins created. He's my favourite character in the trilogy (bar Finnick) and I really like what you've done with him. I completely ship Haymitch and Stephanie! Hoe the characters have progressed is good, as well as how their relationships have evolved so it's not completely unrealistic.

Your writing overall is a great style and flows pretty well. I hope your brilliant writing continues as I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D thank you so much for gracing the world of fanfiction with this story that really captures heartfelt emotion and sorrow perfectly. Okay, I'll stop waffling now... I love your work basically xD
HungerGamesQueen100 chapter 44 . 4/4/2013
I'm glad Stephanie finally confided in Haymitch. The moments between Haymitch & Stephanie were very sweet; & the 'mystery POV' at the end promises more trouble ahead - keep up the good work.
Tiffany
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