|Reviews for The Return of Merlin|
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/12/2013
Nooooooo! update! now! omgods. cliffhanger O:
| MeinGimli chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
finally, i nearly thought this story wouldnt be continued. now i have a little problem. how can morgana cause troubles now when Harry/Merlin defeated here already in the past? Now pls next chap ASAP
| mkeeg91 chapter 7 . 9/12/2013
haha! loved that last line
this is a great story! Merlin in Harry... I don't know if that's a new idea, but I've never read a story like that and I love it!
| god of all chapter 7 . 8/7/2013
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| think-pink-jess chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
Love the story and cant wait for the next chapter.
| Ariz0na-Sky chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
| StormyFireDragon chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
i was trying to send you a private message but for some reason it isnt giving me the option. i have read a great many of your stories and they are good. However, you have a small problem with some of your words.
There, Their, and They're are not interchangeable. You do this frequently in ALL of your stories. You do the same with Your, You, and You're. Adding things like comas and periods, and things will make for a better read.
i myself have the trouble with to, and too. so i can understand not getting the words right. i am a fan of your work, but i do suggest a beta reader to help with grammar and punctuation and such. i hope my words help you in your stories. if you have any question please feel free to send me a message. please keep writing.
| karthik9 chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
| Jamesk19 chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
great chapter can't wait to find out where they got there immortality from (cup of everlasting life maybe since its camelot)
looking forward to next update
| Jamesk19 chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
what a cliff hanger "somethings happened "
great chapter keep writing this amazing story i haven't read anything like it till now.
| Jamesk19 chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
i liked the reactions of the crowd since everyone can't be expected to believe harry is merlin makes it more realistic
great chapter overall
| Jamesk19 chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
another great chapter hopefully next one goes into more detail about harry explaining to the order since cliffhanger is suspense filled
| Jamesk19 chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
so harry is a descendant of himself wow he created one hell of a time paradox wait till his friends find out thats one crazy conversation starter
| Jamesk19 chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
i like how you used the veil to send harry into the past
great chapter this story is pretty uniqe
| Jamesk19 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
great 1st chapter