|Reviews for The Return of Merlin|
| AbaddontheDevourer chapter 7 . 7/31
Pretty good. Love the idea.
| guest 1 chapter 7 . 6/4
| alberto7496 chapter 7 . 1/8
to be continued ? because the story is very beautifull
| Tarix chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
| Almia chapter 7 . 10/7/2014
please update i love this story
| Master Xehanort chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
I love this story can you put in a new chapter and can you also explain how and why Harry has a staff?
| johnmillsloaninvistor chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
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| lovefanfiction120 chapter 7 . 6/3/2014
please keep updating
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/12/2013
Nooooooo! update! now! omgods. cliffhanger O:
| MeinGimli chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
finally, i nearly thought this story wouldnt be continued. now i have a little problem. how can morgana cause troubles now when Harry/Merlin defeated here already in the past? Now pls next chap ASAP
| mkeeg91 chapter 7 . 9/12/2013
haha! loved that last line
this is a great story! Merlin in Harry... I don't know if that's a new idea, but I've never read a story like that and I love it!
| god of all chapter 7 . 8/7/2013
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| think-pink-jess chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
Love the story and cant wait for the next chapter.
| Ariz0na-Sky chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
| StormyFireDragon chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
i was trying to send you a private message but for some reason it isnt giving me the option. i have read a great many of your stories and they are good. However, you have a small problem with some of your words.
There, Their, and They're are not interchangeable. You do this frequently in ALL of your stories. You do the same with Your, You, and You're. Adding things like comas and periods, and things will make for a better read.
i myself have the trouble with to, and too. so i can understand not getting the words right. i am a fan of your work, but i do suggest a beta reader to help with grammar and punctuation and such. i hope my words help you in your stories. if you have any question please feel free to send me a message. please keep writing.