Reviews for The Christmas Present
staceleo chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Great first chapter...but I already knew that! ;0)
fanofsilvervolvos4life chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Awwww poor Edward. Looking forward to where this will go though.
TheObsessed1 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
So sorry for your loss; your brother must have been devistated.
My Aunt's Husband, his Father; died on Christmas morning.
Great start to this story. It's very good just like all your stories.
dolphin62598 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Oh no! Poor Edward! Good gravy - what is going on with Bella?! Can't wait to read more! :)
CoppertopJ chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
He does need to move on. I am Team Edward on this one.
Jasper's Woman chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
I am hooked...I feel so bad for Edward can't Bella see how selfish and stupid she is. Now she's unhappy...serves her right.
shaz308 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Thanks for the update. I hope you had a great Christmas. Looking forward to finding out what is happening with Bella.
molly chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Im afraid he makes a big mistake by moving on (In the next chapter will be a girlfriend/wife for him ?) and not calling her. I think he will regret this, because Bella needs his help and by a cruel twist of fate Bella will suffer terrible for whatever reason.

Whats wrong with me, its christmas and Im downbeat... must be the clouds and rain that gives me a bad mood. By the way, I hope Im wrong, where this story goes.
Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
I love Grandma, and what is up with Bella.
Is she too scared to admit things.
Was Jacob a ruse.
Oh no Edward can't give up.
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
I think Bella could have secret feelings for him too? I could be wrong.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Sorry for you loss, a horrid thing to go through this time of year.
HockeyChick10 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter!
HockeyChick10 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Edward is an idiot, a loveable one but an idiot lol
debslmac chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Erikajo chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
I ate way too many sweets during the past two days. :/
Erikajo chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Yay! You found writing time in between tending kids and making caramel corn. Thank you! :)
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