|Reviews for Twisted Elysium|
| Sora Tayuya chapter 7 . 12/13/2013
What a fascinating chapter! More on the intriguing, and still odd, Pendragon curse, this very interesting, mysterious boy, and Gil also participated in the last war? Fantastic.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 6 . 12/13/2013
A powerful chapter, and an impressive plot build. I do feel for the child version Waver befriended in that time, and I would wish Diarmund get a happier end in this life. It appears as though they are all headed to the same fates as before, however. The Servants, however, are carving their own path.
Oh, and Gilgamesh is just being a boss. Like he should.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 12/11/2013
An exciting, amusing, and important chapter. People connect, disconnect, and flat out tell them to get lost. Good plot.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
What a marvelous, powerful chapter! Developments with each team make things interesting indeed, and the plot only gets better.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 11/21/2013
Another delightful chapter, though I had hoped for Ryunosuke's demise. More planning between Gilgamesh and Zayda, and some important plot around Arturia as well. Very wonderful to see.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
Another brilliantly written chapter! I am undoubtably impressed by your skill in capturing the characters as they exist from the original universe, and how you integrate that into this unique and thrilling plot. The twists are well-timed and the turns are matched with the flow of the piece. Timing is good, as is use of detail. Yes, I am enjoying this very much.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
A truely intriguing first chapter. The action was demure and enthralling, the reveals and speeches well written. Your choices for Servant class at first were questionable, but upon closer study revealed themselves as solid decisions.
This has the makings of a excellent story, and I look forward to completing it.
| Kekkun chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
This is perfect - this is great and I love it, why aren't there any more chapters? I want to see what will happen! I'm so impatient - but I'm so curious!
| tenletters chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
Very entertaining. The thought of Deermud going on the internet to kill time was quite uncanny, haha. He really is quite the modern casual.
| Lion Hearted One chapter 7 . 5/12/2013
This is a really good story so far! I especially like the way you write Kariya and Lance. But, then again, they are my favorite characters, so...
But keep up the good work! This is the best fan fiction I've seen so far in the fandom. :)
| Miss.BadBye chapter 7 . 4/28/2013
Happy to see you updated! Also, wow, this chapter was very long, so I'm sorry if this review is a bit messy.
It seems all of the teams are having issues, some worse than others (the Braconid, for example, was every bit as horrifying as it was to be expected) and you're handling them in a wonderful way. I like how all the partnerships are straining by different reasons, and sometimes I forget this is still Fate and the Holy Grail War, which means that most of them will have to die at some point... I'm still rooting for Team Berserker, though, even if they're against Gil.
I really liked how you voiced Alexander's motivations in this chapter, and the way you explained how the Arthurian myths are working in this universe. I hope to see more of Mordred and Gial, or maybe some team using that knowledge to their advantage, somehow. I'm still a bit confused about what exactly happened in the last Grail War, but I guess it's to be expected since a lot hasn't been revealed yet. I wasn't expecting Gil of all people to know Lance, or to have a personal grudge against him to the point of hating him. The confrontation between these two teams should be interesting.
And, unrelated to the story itself, I think I might have seen your tumblr? I wasn't sure, since it had a lot of things I couldn't remember being the story, but if it was, is it okay if I follow you? (I thought I'd ask first, because I didn't want to seem like a creepy obsessed stalker.)
| AkaiNeko4 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
I have not read chapter 1 yet. I just wanted to register that I had clicked on this out of a continuing campaign of desperation and masochism. Based on statistics I fully expect this to end up another fic I drop after a chapter or too because Saber is my favorite character and no one else seems to like her (again, I speak from experience. I really don't know where all teh Saber fans people speak of anecdotally are). When this happens I don;t usually leave a review; but I like this premise, I have an awesome fanart of teh same concept save off Zerochan, so I wanted to at least say something. Hopefully I am wrong. I like being wrong on these matters.
Also I'm hoping for Saber/Guinevere, since Iri presumably isn't available. 'twould be most awesome.
| chibikaty chapter 6 . 4/24/2013
Especially love the Lancelot-Kariya interaction!
| Match chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
This is legitly the best Fate/Zero fic I've been able to find. I really hope you're still working on it, because I'd love to see more of this Grail War playing out - and I definitely want to see more of the Berserker duo because the dynamic there is just great and super sad
| Gura Kruor chapter 6 . 3/21/2013
I really love this idea. The way you describe each character, each action and decision it's so awesome.
The Noble Pantom of Waver is so kickass and original!
I want to know about the Fourth War in this universe and maybe more of Gil and Zayda's kind of relationship *thanks to this fic she already ship these two* I am waiting for the next chapter! (:
Anyway, I wish you success and a good week *x*
[Sorry for the grammar, my native language is spanish]