Reviews for The Long Way Home
jody.edwards.790 chapter 22 . 1/29
Just gobbled this story up. I can't believe that was you first attempt at fanfic? Seriously?! I realize this was written a few years ago now, but it's my first time reading it and it's so alive for me! Isn't that the magic of good writing?! Thank you, thank you for your talent!
Lauraliath32 chapter 18 . 3/20/2014
I want to batter Splinter over the head with Donatello's bo right now-I know he's being protective of his unruly brood but sheesh, there's a limit to his grumpy intolerance! I'm not usually an advocate of violent decapitations in fics, but then Leo isn't exactly in his usual, sensible frame of mind. Deborah is a great character, strong, loyal and resilient. You're a class writer.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 22 . 2/10/2014
AWWWW Raphie lost his one true looove...waaah...
And now Leo has PTSD. It looks like only Donnie has a happy ending in this story. But still, another story brilliantly executed!
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 20 . 2/10/2014
No. My. GOD.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 18 . 2/10/2014
"Maybe it's April!" "She's right here, bonehead!" He's so funny.
Is the Mistress's magic lingering on Leo and causing him to be extra lusty? Because now he can't be around a girl without trying to...well...
Not that I'D mind if I was there, heheheee...but hopefully they find out how to fix him.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 17 . 2/10/2014
Oh, my poor Leonardo...he's so messed up, in every way. My poor Leo...
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 15 . 2/10/2014
Oh man...that scene with the mistress and Leo...*shiver* I wish that was Meeee...and then she ripped his HEART out. And ATE it. I almost FAINTED, dead away.
But he's awake now! Yippee!
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 12 . 2/10/2014
Damn...poor Tyler. All Deborah tried to do was help them, and what's her reward? Her brother being murdered.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 11 . 2/10/2014
The details in this chapter are some of the best I've ever seen! The cut-aways were suspenseful and had me gasping! It was like an excerpt from an epically awesome, chills down the spine movie!
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 10 . 2/10/2014
Space Heroes! Why in the world would be thinking about Space Heroes at a time like this? Oh, Leo, Leo, Leo...
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 9 . 2/10/2014
OH F*CK...
Ceremony?! EEEK!
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 8 . 2/10/2014
I would have choked the consciousness out of that little boy if I was her. Just saying.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 5 . 2/10/2014
Was it wrong that I wanted Leo to keep hitting him? Oh God...I'm sweating with anxiety.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
I'm getting the feeling that you don't like Splinter so much. In almost every story, he's the dream crusher, the overbearing disappointed father, the horrible decision maker...
And you like torturing Leo. Like, A LOT!
But it's okay, because you do it so beautifully...
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Raph dipped like a damn coward... after he socked his brother in the mouth? And didn't even say sorry. That's sounds so juvenile but I mean come on. I swear sometimes I just wanna... *violent motion*
Phhh... get a freaking therapist, Raph. Get some help. And while you're at it, get over yourself!
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