Reviews for The Long Way Home
Guest chapter 22 . 12/21/2015
I am so sorry I just realized that u said this was your first story AND I've been acting like a crazy raph fan it was an amazing story you have a talent I can't believe this is your FIRST time writing just one last rant Deborah no whyyyyyyy can't raph be happy
Guest chapter 20 . 12/21/2015
Same ranting guest here Splinter deserves everything that happenes to him my opinion has no space for logic I hope he catches some nasty disease No one messes with raph and gets away with it mistress for the win
Guest chapter 17 . 12/21/2015
Same long paragraph guest ranting about splinter All I have to say is donnies on the list and Deborah better not go after shredder is she CRAZY Raph must stop her
Guest chapter 14 . 12/21/2015
Splinter is being so unfair judging Deborah like that I mean he's one to talk a Freaking GIANT RAT Breaking there heart's like that he should be ashamed couldn't he sense she was a good person I shall never forgive him I'm sorry this story is awesome but frankly Splinter is ticking me off first with him always lecturing Leo and now lying to raph Nobody and I mean NOBODY Hurts Raph like that I really love this story thou sorry for the long ranting paragraph but that just process how much I love this story you got me all worked up
forg chapter 22 . 9/26/2015
This so stupid
flikaroo chapter 22 . 5/31/2015
I could not put this fic down once I started reading it. Seriously, you had me walking into walls because I could not tear my eyes away from the ipod screen. The Mistress was deliciously evil. This was your first fanfiction? Seriously? Please keep writing.
FeatherArtist chapter 22 . 1/29/2015
Just gobbled this story up. I can't believe that was you first attempt at fanfic? Seriously?! I realize this was written a few years ago now, but it's my first time reading it and it's so alive for me! Isn't that the magic of good writing?! Thank you, thank you for your talent!
Lauraliath32 chapter 18 . 3/20/2014
I want to batter Splinter over the head with Donatello's bo right now-I know he's being protective of his unruly brood but sheesh, there's a limit to his grumpy intolerance! I'm not usually an advocate of violent decapitations in fics, but then Leo isn't exactly in his usual, sensible frame of mind. Deborah is a great character, strong, loyal and resilient. You're a class writer.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 22 . 2/10/2014
AWWWW Raphie lost his one true looove...waaah...
*Phhhhh*
And now Leo has PTSD. It looks like only Donnie has a happy ending in this story. But still, another story brilliantly executed!
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 20 . 2/10/2014
O0O...
No. My. GOD.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 18 . 2/10/2014
LOLZ MIKEY!
"Maybe it's April!" "She's right here, bonehead!" He's so funny.
Is the Mistress's magic lingering on Leo and causing him to be extra lusty? Because now he can't be around a girl without trying to...well...
Not that I'D mind if I was there, heheheee...but hopefully they find out how to fix him.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 17 . 2/10/2014
Oh, my poor Leonardo...he's so messed up, in every way. My poor Leo...
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 15 . 2/10/2014
Oh man...that scene with the mistress and Leo...*shiver* Whoo...how I wish that was Meeee...and then she ripped his HEART out. And ATE it. I almost FAINTED, dead away.
But he's awake now! Yippee!
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 12 . 2/10/2014
Damn...poor Tyler. All Deborah tried to do was help them, and what's her reward? Her brother being murdered.
Damn.
AriMarvelUniverse chapter 11 . 2/10/2014
WHOOOOAAAAHHH!
The details in this chapter are some of the best I've ever seen! The cut-aways were suspenseful and had me gasping! It was like an excerpt from an epically awesome, chills down the spine movie!
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