|Reviews for One-Ness|
| dhamann7878 chapter 1 . 8/2
interesting story, not quite what was expected
| tammgrogan chapter 10 . 4/16
That was a Wonderful story. Thank you
| noreenklose chapter 10 . 9/20/2016
Thanks for writing.
I really enjoy reading your stories.
If I may "nitpick" you make several mistakes in spelling consistently throughout your stories:
quiet, quite restore, resort trail, trial.
Your story was wonderful, but I am mean-spirited, and I really wish that moRon was eaten by the Horntail.- - -that's just ME, though! ;-P
I truly despise the moRon!
| mckertis chapter 10 . 7/20/2016
Absolutely terrible writing. Characters have barely any proper motivation, and the storyline lacks any logic.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/19/2016
I'm kinda curious to see if the Dursleys will also be obliviated. Despite the loss of magic, and obliviate being used on them, I'm really enjoying this story so far, and am looking forward to the rest of it.
I'm also curious to see if Sirius being godfather is enough for the rule to not apply to them.
| mckertis chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
Cant read this crap. Disgusting.
| willam and jack and jake chapter 10 . 6/2/2016
cool loved it
| willam and jack and jake chapter 9 . 6/2/2016
nice love it
| willam and jack and jake chapter 8 . 6/2/2016
nice very cool
| willam and jack and jake chapter 7 . 6/2/2016
| willam and jack and jake chapter 6 . 6/1/2016
nice very nice
| willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 6/1/2016
| willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 6/1/2016
very well done
| willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 6/1/2016
| willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 6/1/2016
nice very well done