|Reviews for Take Two Round Two|
| abcdefghijklmnop chapter 31 . 3/18
please just do everyone a favor and just put that you're abandoning this story because you're a piece of shit that doesn't give a fuck about this story anymore as you've got a big fucking hard on for Fate Stay Night. You've repeatedly stated in your authors notes on BOTH stories that you'd focus on this an then you just completely forget about this story because a new game or new anime or some new gay midget transvetite clown porn came out on redtube that you just can't resist an forget about this story an when you do come back you go straight to your Fate Stay Night story. So just finish that story an then start an finish the sequel an then maybe in 2 years come back to this story IF you can even be bothered since it's obvious that you REALLY don't give a flying fuck about this story so either put a Rush finish on this story or ABANDON IT (I'd rather you abandon it than rush it an it be pure garbage)
| wdog44 chapter 31 . 3/16
That was some badassery
| DrizztStorm chapter 31 . 3/15
your writing has gotten sooooo much better so quickly it is ridiculous.
i can't wait to read more
| Cantrona chapter 31 . 3/12
How I love reading updates for this story, they always prove to be a mind fuck and a good time. Thank you!
| Connor3428 chapter 1 . 3/12
Am I the only one who reads snafu as supernatural fuckup?
| Zeraphiel chapter 31 . 3/11
As this is my first review on either of your stories I would like to say that in my opinion you are a fantastic writer due to a good usage of an extended vocabulary and monstrous imagination and best of all a very good plot design. On to more important matters, in YAWALEH it was implied that the Oogakari interfered in the Bleachverse(yes comppetely unrelated to the story, I'm just curious) and just recently a stray thoguht entered my head that Orihime essentially has a watered down version of Ghosts fire and was curious if you had thought of how she would interact with the multiverse at large if brought up to Family standards. Anyhow, thank you very for your storytelling/writing I am eagerly anticipating the moments when your new chapters come out.
Un de evarinya one varda
| Dragon0905 chapter 31 . 3/11
Almost a month since you last posted. Not sure how long between you normally take. But there's only one more chapter left in this set. Taking a guess that you plan to have him dimension hop afterwards. Maybe you plan to write it out. Maybe not...but it's so frustrating that I finally get to the end only to find...there isn't one!
| Daniel Wray chapter 1 . 3/9
When will the next update be?
| Dragon0905 chapter 5 . 3/6
Minor issues with your authors note at the end here.
1. You said upperbuilding destroyer then uppercity destroyer. Guessing you meant lower for the building.
2. You said that Superman was the same rank as a super sayajin 3. As in a non-super sayajin pre-namek Vegeta planet destroyer upgraded to basically a galaxy destroyer is weaker than Superman. Don't get me wrong. I love me some Superman. But being honest here. All Vegeta has to do is blow up the planet or sun and Superman is long since toast.
| Guest chapter 31 . 3/6
So happy and really need more
| Dragon0905 chapter 3 . 3/5
After reading the first part of this story and all the way up to here so far, I have so many tiny things I want to argue with you about. But the largest thing that I just can't figure out is how you think Crypt is just crazy. Because out of all the random things you have him do...I can point out most of the time the logic and/or see where it's probably inspired from. Didn't get the cat and toaster joke though. Just seemed like an odd thing to compare. Like a pound of feathers and a pound of gold. They weigh the same just have different compression... actually as I write this I have the thought that it mayyy be about time I talked to a psychiatrist again. Though much like the last few I went to I'm not quite sure what to tell them. I can't just walk in and say I'm crazy. They would just toss me out and say I'm looking for pills or something. Any suggestions?
| Phantom the Eternal chapter 1 . 3/5
Holy fuck dude
What in all the realms that exist possessed you to bring upon us this utter bullshit
And then make us love you for it
| SvenBjorn chapter 31 . 3/5
I have no words...
What the FUCK?! I go away for a few chapters, and come back to this string of bombshells?!
You glorious bastard...
You can decry your writing skills as much as you want. You're a damn legend in my eyes. Clearly though, you're aiming to wrap this up relatively quickly and not drag it out like you did in Yet Again. That makes me a bit sad, but still. Seeing the end of this will be a kind of relief.
On that note, I make my final theory.
The reason for Ghost breaking the rules regarding Naruto. I can only think of one reason Ghost would break a rule even he supposedly follows rigidly.
Naruto is the one that can kill Ghost... for good.
I don't know how, exactly, nor do I know why. But that's my guess. Ghost believes Naruto has the power to kill him for good, hence why he broke one of the rules in regards to him.
Wait... You live in Detroit? Holy shit. I live in Flint. Damn, small world...
| Charcole chapter 30 . 3/5
First of all I'm not posting this on chapter 31 bcos I was just so fuckin triggered at your cliffy... but please I swear contact me and give me updates please I swear ur fanfic keeps me going... i've read both the first fic and TTRT over 10 times so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEE SAY SOMETHING IM DYING UR SO FUCKING GOOD I SWEARRRRRR I DONT GET WHY UR NOT MAKING MILLIONS RN WITH YOUR QUALITY OF WRITING abdsfjhabsdjfkhbajhs
Anyways.. Email: ; Skype: colee4040 Please Please Please dm meeeeeee
| Charcole chapter 31 . 3/5
NOOOOO FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK HOW DARE YOU A THOUSAND OF ZUZUSHI'S CURSES BEFALL YOU WTF IS THIS CLIFF HANGER YOU FUCKAH AJLSBFKUAFBKABFASGKAJHFHSKJSH . U BETTER FUCKING POST WITHIN 2 MONTHS OR ILL FUCKING KILL YOUUUUUU