Reviews for Take Two Round Two
PikachuRXZ chapter 46 . 9/22
I don't review often, but your work is so good I felt compelled to. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and the prequel to this. I basically binged it. My wife thought I was ignoring her with how much I was reading this. You are amazing and I will impatiently await an update to this one.
codeninja676 chapter 3 . 9/14
So you turned Naruto into an actual sociopath, not sure why I was expecting something different from a fanfic written while the manga was ongoing but here we go, it's a trope at this point to make Naruto a sociopath in some way and tbh I feel it betrays the core of the character, hope you write yourself out of it eventually because while Ghost and the gang are enjoyably sociopathic in small doses having the main character of the story like this is going to make reading it a lot harder.
tonioferronio chapter 1 . 9/6
I want you to realize that you have completely ruined fanfiction for me because of how amazing your writing, comedy, story-telling, character personality, and world building is.
Gabriel31 chapter 1 . 8/10
That whole crap with ubw? I skipped it. It was stupid and dumb ash to be completely honest.
Ispastapizza chapter 46 . 8/5
Bro your works are probably the best I have ever read but man will you ever update this story…?
dementicon chapter 46 . 8/5
After spending a week reading both YAWALH and this, I find myself a wreck, for several reasons. The story telling, the humor, the intensity, on one side. The concepts, the world building, the... everything on another side.
Potentially long story short, I will never be able to read another fic and not think "this is nowhere near as good as Third Fang's work".
What I mean to say is...
Thank you! Thank you so very much!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/3
In regard to the whole thing with hinata. I agree and think you handle it tastefully. It's a touchy subject that most people would shy away from. But respect you from handling in a respectful way. Let's not forget that
one suffering the most PTSD is Naruto. Ghost being the sadest that he is probably didn't weigh worse to him than the rest had done to them. P s, could you make it house? Somehow, someway the first time Naruto and hinata actually had sex.m they had to have blind pulled on. And they didn't realize it was like with each other that way. That was some kind of like a good surprise. Don't get me wrong, I get the whole point. Of this and it needs to happen to make you strong. But I just want a little bit of happiness for them and this kind of messed up situation.
toombsstoners598400 chapter 46 . 7/22
Amazing chapter as always. I hope you're doing well, and hope you update it soon!
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 7/5
nice very nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 7/5
well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 7/5
Jaq O Diamonds chapter 33 . 6/17
Oh dear god, I forgot about the “Sending Crypt Against Rabbit Ladything. I was literally laughing nonstop for a good 2-3 minutes, and spent the following 5 minutes just giggling. It’s just… so beautiful.
Huheh chapter 46 . 6/4
ah shit i missed the 1 year anniversary
Mr. Nobody chapter 46 . 6/3
so is this story abandoned or is it just gonna take you another six months to a year to FINALLY post another chapter before you forget about it for another year?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29
Came across your stuff recently and have devoured it did the first series now on to the timescape Chapter is good as well as all the others something I just want to point out. Can naruto and Ghost get their balls back just for one chapter maybe? Naruto's in love and listens to hinata that's cool. But the way he lets people like Sakura and ino walk all over him and flat out torture him for their Entertainment is kind of BS. He has accelerated healing. He still feels the pains of all the poisons they inject when they stab, beat and break his bones. And yes that is a form of torture hurting someone healing them and hurting them again. Just for once can you have him just? Beat the c*** out at least Sakura or Ino. And again I get ghost is married now he loves the girl's doesn't mean it has to be their dormant. And it's kind of funny to see the Script flipped on anko. Creation note I think a relationship with haku would be funny because of how she was looking at him in that 1 arc but he was training And she saw him as I candy. And having zabuza p***** off at him would be hilarious.
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