Reviews for Take Two Round Two
Gamester200 chapter 46 . 9/25
I’m so heartbroken to have caught up. I NEEDNMORE. FANG PLEASEEEEEEE
Riku Uzumaki chapter 46 . 9/25
At last, some more people finally understood the insane revelation that so many people from Konoha are coping with.
Hunter of The chapter 25 . 9/24
"And people can't see the resemblance."

Is Dimitri Ghost's son?
red neo ranger chapter 46 . 9/20
Love this story cant wait to read more
Guest chapter 16 . 9/20
Umm not to be a grammar Nazi, because this is actually pointing out that you used the wrong noun:

It is a rice paddy, not a rice pattie. One is an agricultural field, the second is a foodstuff. Therefore, The Land of Rice Patties would be part of the Land of the Gluten Free Sugar Plum Fairy and not a venue in the Naruto verse.

It is admittedly an easy mistake to make. However, I know you value and pride yourself on your writing, and this is a completely glaring error that needs to be fixed.
Gamester200 chapter 41 . 9/18
The more I read this. The more I can truly say this is the best fan fiction I have EVER read. The amount of world building Fang as created is insane. Please god never stop writing. Please!
AFatDragon chapter 12 . 9/18
I usually review at the end of a fic, or during a chapter that was recently released. But my god if that didn't make me laugh an ugly laugh. Edgy as fuck, and it definitely wouldn't fly nowadays, but holy hell that was the funniest omake I have ever read.
red neo ranger chapter 36 . 9/13
Can u please translate the god/ prenace speak it hurts my head to try to read at the end of chapters

Like this one

Z̵̧̛̛̉̉͊̂͐̀̇̒̏̊̅͋̆̐͋̀̍͂̿̕͘ư̴͖̞̻̟̠̞̹̗̼̘̪̓̃̄̐́̐̅͋̑̍̚͘̕z̸̳̦͒ų̷͓̜̤͎̭͍͖̝̀̔̃̈̃̅͌͆͂̎̀̐̍̒̓̆̓̈͛̎̂̇̈́̒̚͝͝͠s̶͖̙̯̭̟̪̑

"Ẁ̶̢͓̗̥͍̭̘͉̻͍̰̮̗̥͉̥̤̎̓̃͌̊̑̓̐̔̋̉̀̽͐̎͐̋̄̑̾̓̂͊͌͘͘̕͜͜͝e̷̡̡̡̡̨̯͚͇̟̙͉̝̜̻̳̱͖̦̪̻̭̗͖͗͊̄͋͑͂͑̇͗̔͑̓̈́͐̒̒́͒̓͘͜͝ͅͅl̷͚̖͚̎͗̌͋͊̍̎̋̈̚͝ļ̸̧̬̬̫͈̩̥̗̟̟͖̖̫̼̌͝ͅ?̴̢͉̦̞͔͎͔̖͔̝͍̭̼̪̺̒̎̉̈͒̅̏͘̚͘͝͝͝͝ ̶̨͎͙͓̣͇̲̝̜̠͓̰̲̼̤̾̉̋̐́͛͋͐̎́́̎̈́̆̀͊̽̓̓̌̄͜͠͝ Ȟ̶̢̫͓̮̒̄̀̂̊̓͌̈́̃̉̾̓̉̀̈́́͠ä̷̡͖̞͚̰̝̠̥̠̼͈̲̮͇̩͈́̑́̇̈́̉̑̉̂̎͛̈́͛̄͆̇̀͛̅̚̕͜͠͝͠ͅͅͅv̶̧̨̧̯̦̥̣̫̟̫̆̅̏̿̉̏̅͑̋͌̈̍̀̌͋̌͊̚é̸̘͔͕͖̋̅̈́͛ ̷̧̡̧̼̺̜͔̼̹̫͚̫̘̰̪̗̪̌̿̅͝ỷ̴̢̧̯͈̻̼̜̺̟̤̙̯̺̭̩̙͕͚̥̀͑͌̚o̷͖̘̜͍̩̫̩̤͍̖̘̜͂́̊̌͒̍̒ų̶͈̜̳̤̯̲͈̞̙͎͈̟͔̞̮̬͓̻̯͖͇̜̣̞̼̐́́̆͑̆͑̔̏͊̈̂͋͜͝ͅ ̷̛͍͍͖̝͖̬̖͉̞͉̤͎̟̖̰̘͙͕̗̋͒̀̍͌̄́͛̈́̍̒̇͋͆̎͋̈́̾̈́̀̕͝͠e̶̜̖̝͈̋͑̐̎̿̾̒͌̒̈́̀͂̊̽̉͑̊̓̆̈͝͝͝n̷̠̱̽͆̄̎͂̓̾̍͐͜j̷̻̼̳͈̮̼̯̀̀̌̈́ͅơ̵̥̰̲͚̱̰͖͔̘͙̞͇̣̦͗͂̅̄̓̏͋̄̀̀͒͆̅̓̀̎̈̑̕͠͝͠͝y̸̧̛̛̟̰̜͔͕̠̜̪͙̘͑̏̍̒͛̅̀͊̓̉̎̈́̓̈́̐̃̍̊͂̈̂̃̕͘͠͠e̴̡͈̞͙̅́d̸̦̭̗͔͕̹͖̝͚͔̣̮͔̭̳͛̍̅̓̈́̆̓̋͂̊͐̍̂̈́̈́̋̃̌̍͊̃͜͜͝ͅ ̴̧̰͍̪̣̝̜̲̼͔̞͚͚̿̅̓͆̔̂̎͑̈́́͋̂̀̓̿͝ͅṁ̴̟͊̃̌́̈̀́̽̉͊̂̒̋͒̇͠ÿ̴̧̨̧̡̰̫̭͕̦̥̫̺̮̟̩̦̰̳̼̠̣̯́ͅͅ ̷̮͓̮͖̺̦̟̱̘̼͋͐̽̌͋̑͆̑͑͊͗̏͂͒̐̄̓͘ẹ̵̢̯̺̈́̍̈͗̅͆͛̌͑̍̈́͗̃̾̚̕͘̕͝ņ̸̛͓̙̩͎̰̲̞̜̱̣͓̤͇̟͈͂̔̿̐́̑̇͗͌̄͐́̌̾͊̑͋̾͝͠t̴̛͕̩̤͓͚̼̞̞̙̜̬͕͉̻̟̥͖͎̰̮̥̄̅̎ê̶̞̹̹͖̰͉̠͈̣̭͚͐͒̓̈́̏͒̄̿́̽͠r̴͙̊̈̀̈̕͠ẗ̶̨̡̝͓͈̝̣͕̙͕͎̼̲̺͙̼́̾̈́̇̈́̑̓͊̃͛̄̈́́̅́̍̈́̈́͝͝á̶̧̨̧̡̪͚̞̦̳̹̪̰̺̀̾̾͗͌͛̀͐͋́͑̀̐͒͘̕͝į̵̨̞͉͈̟̹̯̀̌́͂̋̎͂̔̂̓̈́͛͒̑͊̕͘̕͝n̸̨̡̛̲̰̥̖̱̤͈͎̝̤͙͔̼̗̳̯̹̳̏͒̈́̏̒̒͌͗͌͊̓̇̎̍̈́̄́̔͗̂̓͘͘̚͝͠m̵͉̺͇̣͙̠̯̻̬̬̐͂̋̾̅͑͗̿̅̐̔̄̂̑̒͆̊͘͝ͅè̷̠̳̬̱̱̮̹̠̞̈́͒̔̈͝n̶͖̳̠̖͊̈̂́ͅt̶̡̡͇͕͔̞̙̖͉̟̯͔͓͕͚͎̰̙̝̲̦̥͍̣̮̬̍̓̊̈̃̾͗̒́̓͐͜͜ͅ?̸̢̤̼̘͖̖̲͎̳͈͎̯̻̜͕͇̻̘̰̅̐̈́̀"

Please i cant understand what this says
Gamester200 chapter 30 . 9/3
I wonder how many missed the Akmed reference “I KILL YOU”
Tumelo Uzumaki-Midoriya Mariri chapter 12 . 8/31
Coming from a nigga, this omake had me ROLLING, fam
Sensowrath chapter 46 . 8/27
I just want to say, your stories are some of the best I’ve ever read, fanfiction or not. And they’re absolutely the very best I’ve ever read when it comes to implementing time travel and original characters. No matter how many times I’ve read them, I always come back and every time I find new details I miss. I honestly just wanted to let you know that and that your stories have given me a countless amount of enjoyment. Keep up the great work!
Septide chapter 46 . 8/14
So about a year and a half ago I got a new job in a gold mine, and needed something to do with my down time so I decided to read this again. I previously finished YAWALEH years ago in school but decided to start it all again. Best thing I did. I love your work a lot, and honestly I prefer it over the original naruto. So keep up the great work I’m looking forward to it a lot even if I now have to wait. -From some random Australian guy
AmethystWind95 chapter 42 . 8/6
there's a big bug on the whole trip to iron part: Shizune suddenly went from being at Iwa to participating in the trip starting from Konoha, and now she's actually at Iwa all the time and only met up now (it was mentioned Tsunade was looking for her assistant and apprentice here)
sidwid851 chapter 46 . 8/5
Dude I'll pay good money if you turned this into a comic book or manga
Wtf chapter 1 . 8/2
I am looking at the Words and see 1million what
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