Reviews for Harry Potter and the Swarm
Neo-Devil chapter 19 . 10/26/2014
what Harry would turn into would be like Kerrigan, only instead of queen, it shall be King of Blades.
CthuluWarlock chapter 19 . 10/13/2014
this is amazing i hope you continue it
Ranmaleopard chapter 18 . 10/12/2014
This is god damned amazing I really can't wait for more. Please continue!
Tsudonym chapter 2 . 9/17/2014
Coulda chain casted ennervate on the cocoon. The spell is tailor made for providing the target with energy and alertness.
bookcoda chapter 19 . 9/13/2014
Ha cool!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2014
to who every saying ron a jealous jerk, he got jealous one time and he had a fight in 4 year, quit acting like he was not there for his friends, and he save harry life risking his own.
Ryu Master of Seals chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
The ritual part sounded so stupid
Guest chapter 19 . 8/13/2014
damn 1yr not cont. i so like this fic pls update more.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/4/2014
I think you're taking this a little too slowly, they're Zerg...lets see the Swarm!
MyCopacetic chapter 19 . 7/31/2014
Thank you for writing. Good story. Solid premise. You actually created a good argument for ron. From this day hence forth I shall stop bashing the living weasly out of him.
Vilkath chapter 19 . 7/25/2014
Interesting stuff and I always love Zerg cross overs. The star craft universe has a lot of interesting idea's but I always felt the plot left something to be desired in terms of fanfiction. Cross overs solve this issue. Sadly most stories die off really quickly and I'm glad to see this go to full 19 chapters so far.

The HP side of things seems to take over the story at times, even going so far as to treating interactions with the swarm as interruptions to their daily lives. Harry's friends in particular are starting to get annoying in their inability to accept that Harry is not ignoring them to be rude. Ron's finally starting to get it, but it's become a bit of a running nag in the story so far. Seriously harry needs to find a way to multi task better or his friends need to learn to shut up about him spacing out if it's not life threatening or some one like Dumbledore is around.
Vilkath chapter 4 . 7/23/2014
Logic, rules and the law were always funny things in HP verse. I never understood why Hermonie was so stuck on authority in canon since it lacked any kind of consistency in the wizarding world. Any dark wizard would get off scott free because of lack of evidence while Harry and other good wizards would go to Azkaban and the like on nothing but rumor and hearsay from known enemies like malfoy.
Lord of No Fate chapter 19 . 7/18/2014
Very interesting story, please update soon!
vmage2 chapter 19 . 7/17/2014
This is really good. Hope for more frequent updates.
memesofproduction chapter 19 . 7/16/2014
A genuinely interesting crossover fic brought down by unnecessary indy!Harry bullshit.
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