Reviews for Harry Potter and the Swarm
Aprion chapter 19 . 7/15/2014
this is a great story. I really enjoy how youve integrated the zerg mechanics into harrys world. Please update this story soon :)
Priest chapter 19 . 7/7/2014
great story hope you continue it soon
Entoarox chapter 19 . 7/8/2014
Its been a long while since this was updated, so I'd really like to know if its still being maintained or not?
Luke Dragneel chapter 13 . 6/3/2014
Technically genders in the swarm go to the sentient versions, broodmothers, and human infested. It would make more sense for Harry to have a single broodmother from each magical race he infests.
Luke Dragneel chapter 6 . 6/3/2014
The good thing about the Zerg being in the HP verse is the abundant supply of magical creatures. A good place to plant the Hive would be the Isle of Drear where the Quentipods live. It would provide a good base of operations where nobody would come looking. Then add in all the good types of magic that could be used defensively such as the suits of armor that they use in the battle for Hogwarts.
Also, I would think that the Chamber of Secrets would have made a great base of operations inside the school, especially if they found the secret exist into either the forest or the lake.
Luke Dragneel chapter 5 . 6/3/2014
Luna is the next queen of blades, it would be funny if Luna attempted the familiar summoning ritual and got either a snorkack or a broodmother( maybe even the Queen herself...)
Luke Dragneel chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
The problem I see coming from this is that you stained a cloak that shouldn't even be possible, especially considering that it has survived intact hundreds if not thousands of children/teenagers without getting damaged or ruined(through stain or wear and tear of life in a castle.
Also, it should be able for Harry to grow his psionic reserve.
Luke Dragneel chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Great idea using the summoning ritual from FoZ as that would explain why/how the swarm found its way to earth. Personally, I disagree with people who think having the Swarm turn into different buildings being too game like. The resource gathering is a necessary if mundane part of building an army, the fact that zerg just happen to be able to form into the buildings they need is just one advantage they have over others.
Psi-Stigma chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
when they publish chapter 20?
Cneasaigh chapter 19 . 6/1/2014
I like this every character outside the swarm not counting Luna is very like the general story though.
Hyloch chapter 18 . 5/25/2014
Great story! Would love to see more :3
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
You used the summoning from familiar of zero...
MasterShadowAssassin chapter 19 . 5/5/2014
love the story hope you update soon-MSA
Talsbreath chapter 19 . 5/2/2014
Great story hope to see you continue updating soon.
uo-chou chapter 19 . 4/22/2014
Good work, I look forward to reading more!
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