Reviews for Harry Potter and the Swarm
reptoholic chapter 14 . 7/20/2016
Keep up the good work.
reptoholic chapter 13 . 7/20/2016
Getting good
reptoholic chapter 12 . 7/20/2016
I hope their relationship progresses and he doesn't fawn over giffy
reptoholic chapter 11 . 7/20/2016
I am curious what she looks like? How does teh evolution change them. I hope Harry starts chagning soon
reptoholic chapter 10 . 7/20/2016
I hope they kill them.
reptoholic chapter 9 . 7/20/2016
better chapter
reptoholic chapter 8 . 7/20/2016
ENjoying it, though it is VERY slow.
reptoholic chapter 7 . 7/20/2016
for being annoyed with drama you are adding quite a bit. If you want to progress your character he needs to mature mentally. he is still thinking like a pre pubescent child.
reptoholic chapter 6 . 7/20/2016
enjoyed it, glad he is not turning back to the pacifist ideals.
reptoholic chapter 5 . 7/20/2016
Too light and he dosn't really seem to care for his swarm. He should be more attached and treat them better
reptoholic chapter 4 . 7/20/2016
YES! LOVE LUNA
reptoholic chapter 3 . 7/20/2016
I hope he becomes independent. Just have to say, I hate Ginny. She was probably the worse thing to the series. I do hope that if you do a pairing that it is not with her.
reptoholic chapter 2 . 7/20/2016
Very interesting. I hope he starts getting smarter though and studying/ learning different kinds of magic.
reptoholic chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Wow, this looks very interesting. I hope his mind set is different from canon and he is not manipulated.
Priest chapter 19 . 6/29/2016
this is a very well written story and i hope that you haven't given up on it.
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