Reviews for Harry Potter and the Swarm |
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reptoholic chapter 14 . 7/20/2016 Keep up the good work. |
reptoholic chapter 13 . 7/20/2016 Getting good |
reptoholic chapter 12 . 7/20/2016 I hope their relationship progresses and he doesn't fawn over giffy |
reptoholic chapter 11 . 7/20/2016 I am curious what she looks like? How does teh evolution change them. I hope Harry starts chagning soon |
reptoholic chapter 10 . 7/20/2016 I hope they kill them. |
reptoholic chapter 9 . 7/20/2016 better chapter |
reptoholic chapter 8 . 7/20/2016 ENjoying it, though it is VERY slow. |
reptoholic chapter 7 . 7/20/2016 for being annoyed with drama you are adding quite a bit. If you want to progress your character he needs to mature mentally. he is still thinking like a pre pubescent child. |
reptoholic chapter 6 . 7/20/2016 enjoyed it, glad he is not turning back to the pacifist ideals. |
reptoholic chapter 5 . 7/20/2016 Too light and he dosn't really seem to care for his swarm. He should be more attached and treat them better |
reptoholic chapter 4 . 7/20/2016 YES! LOVE LUNA |
reptoholic chapter 3 . 7/20/2016 I hope he becomes independent. Just have to say, I hate Ginny. She was probably the worse thing to the series. I do hope that if you do a pairing that it is not with her. |
reptoholic chapter 2 . 7/20/2016 Very interesting. I hope he starts getting smarter though and studying/ learning different kinds of magic. |
reptoholic chapter 1 . 7/20/2016 Wow, this looks very interesting. I hope his mind set is different from canon and he is not manipulated. |
Priest chapter 19 . 6/29/2016 this is a very well written story and i hope that you haven't given up on it. |