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Interesante

This, kinda, was a really lame chapter.
Like how can you set up a thoroughly enjoyable series of chapters and then go, oh I should go 1 finger, no seal, gentle poke that can throw a person into a wall to creator 60m away.
This Chapter is bad with dramatic emo Mary Sue ending.

Another story where Naruto's a little bitch why am I not surprised

I want a Naruto x tayuya or narutayu

Good!

It should've just been Naruto and Tayuya not some shitty Harem

Patiently waiting for an update keep up the good work

this leans much more towards silly and forced instead of nostalgic and endearing.

To have the exact same plot device of him falling into a wagon and getting stuck happen more than one, and barely even a few chapters apart just seems unimaginative rather than a fun call back to a previous "adventure".

oh joy. another ham fisted attempt to downplay how OP shadow clones are. It's an OP skill with Naruto's Chakra reserves, most everyone understands that, why make Naruto smart enough to realize it but then not use it for some random "oh well it will inconvenience other people" type reason?

it's not so disappointing he's refusing to use clones, but the reasoning is what I'm finding aggravating.

A tad on the nose with his comments about being a "Mary Sue", get some mean reviews from some people thinking he's creating his own jutsu too easily? oh well. it's funny to see the guy with basically every boost possible (except a kekkei genkai and/or dojutsu) act like he's just some normal fella.

where are the smuts?

Naruto is the one who knocks!

Hope this finds you alive and well, hopefully you come back finish this masterpiece for an old man.

If Naruto does want to improve his skills, does he spar with Iruka? Because it is written how no one in his age group is adequate enough to be his sparring partners to further improve in taijutsu and without any parents to get some advice to, Naruto can go to Iruka for critique, review, and for survey on ways to improve his pranks, or how it is impossible to implement. He could even go to the hokage to get advice as he seems to have received a pass on being able to seem him frequently. You can aleast make Naruto realize how amazing and priceless his current situation is and take advantage of the resources his has to not just improve but soar above others to get the respect, and love he so desperately want.