Reviews for Kim Possible: D - Virus
WhoKnows chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
That was so fun!
WhoKnows chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
I'm sorry to report that pointing out possible errs in this story takes me to far away from the story itself and will therefore have to be discontinued. Again I'm sorry.
WhoKnows chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
When you wrote "Ron stood up and walked over to where Kim sat with Rufus on his shoulder."
it will be interpreted as it's written. (Ron walks to Kim and SHE has Rufus on HIS shoulder?)

The correct way of writing this could be something like
"Ron, with Rufus on his shoulder, stood up and walked over to where Kim sat."
or
"Ron put Rufus on his shoulder, stood up and walked over to where Kim sat."
WhoKnows chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
If I'm going to keep reading this story I will need some apocalyptic music... be right back.
WhoKnows chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
When you wrote "with their mouth hanging wide open."

Did you mean "with their mouth(S) hanging wide open"?
WhoKnows chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
When you wrote
"Nine out of every ten homes contain its political and financial influence is felt everywhere."

Did you mean
"Nine out of every ten homes contain its products and it's political and financial influence is felt everywhere."?
WhoKnows chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
When I read "the Parasol Corporation" I went like
Desk: Apply directly to forehead in emergency situations.
*oops, I broke the table*

I like where this is going.
Rapier11 chapter 10 . 1/16/2013
So Interesting! Looking so forward to read the next chapter! :)
Aceina chapter 10 . 1/13/2013
good chapter
HairyLimey chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
As a fan of both Kim Possible and Resident Evil I have to say that I'm loving this story please update soon.
Reon-D-Anibis chapter 9 . 1/12/2013
LOLOLOLOLOL
Kim's a genius
ShadowCub chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
I love a good zombie story and this looks like one.
Reon-D-Anibis chapter 7 . 1/3/2013
DODGE!
boston blue chapter 6 . 1/2/2013
Great ch can't wait to see what they get themselves into !
DragoLord19D chapter 6 . 1/1/2013
Give me a cookie or I'll sic ma zombie puppies on you. RIGHT NOW!
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