Reviews for DEMONS
Salerina chapter 2 . 2/6
... Can I ask. When Kazama approached her, why didn't she screamed? or something... Kazama kinda OOC (or is he already OOC in the first chapter?)
Salerina chapter 1 . 2/6
I like it! The story is interesting! Some minor grammar mistakes (and where's the "."?) but still good nonetheless.
I agree with you: it's too short! Should expand it a "little" bit.

Looking forward to update!
Ina chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
your story is amazing. can't wait to read more :)
xOx ShinjiHirako XoX chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Hello :) This is a very interesting story so far ;) I just wanted to point out that there are a few grammer/spelling errors. I know you mentioned that in Chapter 1, but I think you should get a Beta Reader if this worries you :D They can be really helpful and can help you learn from your mistakes ;) Good luck with the story
Yaoilover956 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
Noooo! i want more T.T its so cute please when u have the time please continue this lovly story :D
kirayamapi chapter 5 . 8/30/2013
Really like! please update :DDD
AnimePleasegood chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
Chizuru will finally depart with him. Can't wait for this evening! Please , you really need to continue it.
AnimePleasegood chapter 4 . 8/21/2013
A tattoo. I never thought that marks will be something like that. Chizuru have right now , no chance to escape from him. That Kazama ! XD Lol, that was a greatest chapter between what I read! Wow, usually Sen help Chizuru to escaping from Kazama . But this time , she is really helping him. If only she could be like this at the anime. She interrupted Kazama almost kiss during the ova ,which made me hate her a bit.
AnimePleasegood chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
Lol, chizuru couldn't resist Kazama. I mean she was having some other thoughts*an other world*
( Which mature people will get it ) with this bite. Who could blame her ? I liked how you descripted Kazama bites. it's was just so hot. _
AnimePleasegood chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
OMG , Kazama entrance for Chizuru was so good. He had to check her blood by bite her. Oh god, that was great! I like it ! XD
AnimePleasegood chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Kazama x Chizuru fanfic. Same here , I really think they fit each other more. I played the game in psp , and his route was more shorter then the other . TT
Mya chapter 5 . 6/14/2013
My reaction when I finished *Noooo! where is the 'Next' button ?! ...I'm going to cry ;( *
Sooo lovely ...Chizuru and Kazama are my my favourite pair :)...they could go with a boat on a lake ...or a fancy restaurant...good luck with the story anyway...reaaally want to see what's next xD
EternityWithU chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
i love this fanfiction hope u write more illbe waiting! O
Elonore chapter 5 . 5/19/2013
J'adore ta fiction, j'adore le couple Kazama Chizuru, et je VEUX suite ! :DDDD
Phamenia chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
Ahhh. Inspirations of crushes. Always lead to magical things. Good and a bad typeof good. Glad you still update! Be awaiting your next update.
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