Reviews for The Chosen One Chronicles: Vision
Fan or Follower chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
If that wasn't Yoda in the shadows it would have been really creepy.
Because it was Yoda, it's still kinda creepy.
MuggleCreator chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Awwww! Nice.
hagadoe chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
j'adore j'adore
MuggleCreator chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
Wow. Yeah, he might... Qui, please consider a Padawan!
hagadoe chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
I love ... I love ... I love
I know I repeat myself but what else to say. Your post are spaced, but the story is so beautiful, so well written that we can not blame you

Strongly thereafter. I'm super happy that Qui-Gon attempts already Obi.
I feel it will be an eventful one padawan there
Bloody Phantom chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
who wouldn't suffer a heart attack hearing that? obi-wan is still quite a young boy...too young for stunts like one, obi-wan!
FireAndSteel chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Seems good so far! But its a pretty long wait for the next chapter :(
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Ooh... Nice beginning!
Bloody Phantom chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
yay! the new story is up! poor obi-wan, getting all those visions...five years old? doesnt that seem a little young to become a padawan? oh well, it's your story and the young age would not stop me from reading or make me hate this's a good start! i'll be waiting for the next update!