Reviews for Wizards Fall
lazyguy90 chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
Nice work on this.

I was hoping for a small epilogue featuring an older Harry, Hermione and Luna or perhaps their descendants ready to leave their paradise and inherit the Earth, but yeah if they're going to stay hidden away for that long, 1000 years might give us something more sci fi than anything else.

Anyway well done on this.
DarkEros07 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Alyx & Bob, I LOVE YOU GUYS! I ALWAYS enjoy reading your stories! I had forgotten bout you guys there for a while, cuz I had read all your stuff that was completed since I only read completed works(too many people abandoning their stories on here and then i get pissy when I find out its abandoned...UGH!) Ironicly I am also in the process of reading uhmm...i dont remember hte name of it, the one where everyone thinks harry & voldy are muggles...lol. im lovin it so far, i read it at work..shhhh..dont tlel my boss! Anyways, keep writing! you are AWESOME!
GenJordan chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Read/enjoyed it elsewhere, upping your review count here.
Tribernator chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
Honestly, I think the hardest part would be avoiding turning it into a star trek/star wars type of crossover if you did move 1000 years into the future. Further honesty, when I saw this story get extra chapters I kinda hoped I would see them in the future, but this story has turned out absolutely awesome. Thank you for sharing it with those of us on . Your stories are all wonderful works, and I truly enjoy reading every single one of them.
LifeIsAGreatAdventure chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Great to see this posted to the wider world. One suggestion on future postings would be that if you plan to set them, particularly the Sunset Sunrise series, it might be a good idea to post one chapter per day. So many fics get updated every day that if an excellent one like this goes up in a block, many new readers may miss out on your excellent work.
thanks again for this excellent tale.
slashslut chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
i love your stories! im always guaranteed an imaginative, long read!
Firehedgehog chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
OMG! i'm so happy you posted this on ffnet also
Hurin3 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
You have written many fine stories, and I have read most of them, but this, along with its companions, is my favorite. Love the premise and unconventional structure, and of course I'm a sucker for well-written H/Hr.

I do hope you return with more someday. There are lots of areas that could be covered/amplified.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Don
hentai18ancilla chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
I think you're first chapter should be last-it made the rest of your wonderful chapters lose their lustre unfortunately.
hentai18ancilla chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Well I really like this story!
Rainbow2007 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
love it
raw666 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
I think this should have been the last chapter, instead of the first. I think it would be more intersting to tell the mundane about the magical world and let them deal with the magicals for the war they created.
gewfatal1ty chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
Thank you for posting your on Fanfiction
Tribernator chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Wow, very nice story. I can see why it would be a one shot, and I can also see the space for a followup chapter or 7. :p
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