Reviews for Dr McDreamy
aslandprince chapter 20 . 2/5
PLZ update
twilight-et-the-vampire chapter 20 . 1/23
h√Ęte de la suite
LeaMicheleLove chapter 20 . 1/14
This is brilliant. I would love to see an update soon. I love this couple when it's written well. I look forwards to more from you.
catgrl chapter 20 . 1/6
Oh wow that was some flashback.. Well I do hope everything goes well and Charlie takes the news good. Can't wait for more...
catgrl chapter 19 . 1/6
So Bella had to do some thinking and wanted some alone time... Wow she had a lot of missed calls and text's..
catgrl chapter 18 . 1/6
So sounds like everything was going good until Christmas when Bella got sick.. Bella ending up taken three tests and found out she is pregnant...
aniylav27 chapter 20 . 1/5
You need to update and you need to update now, loving it.
PaulaB87 chapter 20 . 1/5
awesome i am not normally a big carlisle and bella fan but am looking forward to your next update
Zelda Ray chapter 20 . 1/4
Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!
Debbie Hicks chapter 20 . 1/4
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Alice's pov
Ch.
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then it happened in the dead of night all of the Sudden a vision roared of Bella carrying Quints was rare in women but it happened it was Jasper my husband I Started the Car fast I went to save her life then reached the home fast as a whip he reportrf Pvises broke Spinal cord Cracked oh my god it is time she is into dangerous Labor too late then he called some coven to halp us then Bella was so sick or worse dying from the kids you are right it is Quints then suddenly all of the sudden from the shadows were a ancient Extraterrestrial coven drained but had children then the both Shook hand firmly first contact was a crisis one then all of the Sudden had to Donate our venom a very far too much more monstrous but all of massive Whopping but as all of to her and her children then it happened her scream was started the young Vulcan woman was in her robes and a wig of longer jet brown with curls and swirled side wearing ceremomial but the more Holiest Traditional but fully-time Chief high priestess's robes wearing her mixed Ceremonial but Holiest Vulcan headdress prepared herself then took out her ritual blade then Sliced it but Bella Screamed like Amanda Grayson in labor herself was T'Lar then suddenly the babies Bit were taken with teeth Bella were venomous like their father Carlisle your Son Sir! She is Changing into a Vampire he sounded like Ambassador Sarek of the planet Vulcan So human then with the others born then I heard it a Changing heart herself was overgoing with the Both merged donated Vampire Venom began to recall her final days as a human then it stopped then herself blinked open her Crimson eyes it was very Fully Complete the worse is over survived the Dangerous birth but the transitoning into our race as a Vampire but as time Went one the now fully-mature but grown up Hybrids were granted names but they became members of the Cullen coven who look mostly human but fully Vampire looked healthy but strong were deadly but strong but powerful but gained members then all of the sudden it happened they never aged at all.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/4
U want my suggestion? Don't stop there and keep writing
Joleigh13 chapter 20 . 1/4
Yes now this is more your writing style. I guys you were tired or in a rush the last two chapters. This I do like. But I do wish Alice didn't have much to di with it. I wish that Bella tells Carlisle herself without Alice and Jasper there.
MS.TAYLORBLACK chapter 1 . 1/4
I love the story line. I was alittle uncomfortable with the position at first but I sucked it up because it's actually a really amazing story.
Zelda Ray chapter 19 . 1/3
Love it you need to post the hext chapter soon I'm living in suspense!
Jordan chapter 19 . 1/2
This is happening very very fast. I would have liked to see a little more panic stretched into a couple of chapters before she tells him. Your writing style has changed as well. You are not using spell check and it is really coming out in your writing. Great story with lots of potential. Just slow down and take your time telling it...
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