|Reviews for Life of a Saint|
| androidsasa chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Okay, this is set in Saints Row (1), yes? If so, you should not have mentioned the Brotherhood of Stilwater - they do not exist yet.
Also, you've given Trane the same last name as a main character and lieutenant, Dex. On that, Trane's last name is Johnson in the summary but not in the story?
And finally, in SR(1) the Saints are a fairly new gang and have not been going on for ten years.
Just sayin'. You need to know your facts before writing and posting a FF.