|Reviews for Mechanic|
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/26/2016
This story has lost its flow of direction regarding plot
| Supergoddad chapter 17 . 12/26/2016
That was fun! It's been some time since I read this story and I know why I loved it so much again.
I mean, you certainly know a good amount about guns, a topic which doesn't actually stir a real interest in me. And of course, you know how to write and you keep writing. That's what's important in my opinion.
Also, doing what you want and never letting someone tell you otherwise is important.
I'll see you later!
| the metaphysical god of heroes chapter 6 . 7/28/2016
Liked the song I can imagine a sullen tone to it for ethan
| eisceire chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Kay so - kudos for finding a niche on the ship as needed to be filled & your opening which really drew the audience in. Yes the beginning was a tad confused & language a bit to terse to be lucid. Can live with that & most of all in opening salvoes. Totally do not like how Marty Stu this OC comes over as. If we're reading a Lagoon fic we wanna root for our tried & trusted not your pet brainspawn. Lost me in 1st few paragraphs for all I held on till end of chapter.
| Supergoddad chapter 16 . 3/8/2016
I have to say, I have read the story in a couple of hours and it's fucking awesome! I read some of your author notes and I just don't understand why people (if they can be called that) would discourage you - or any other author - to stop writing. I won't bother trying to understand, so I'll put my focus on praising you.
I have to admit, I think you're a great writer with a good sense with what has to be in the story and what not. Though it's not the longest story I've read, I feel relaxed and excited when I read a chapter! Oh and of course, I want to know what happens next, that's one of the most important aspects of a story. Thank you so much for writing, flamers can go to hell, because this is one damn good story!
A rainbow amount of love,
P.S. How's the romance progressing? I found that some romance actually goes pretty well inside an adventure story, so I decided to ask.
| Kelborn Ordo chapter 16 . 2/15/2016
| Ezkutu chapter 14 . 4/18/2015
It's been a while since I read this fic for the first time and I still enjoyed it like then. Good fic! A pity it hasn't been updated in a while. I suppose you're frequently asked this but do you plan to publish new chapters? Still a good read!
| He23t chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
Man I miss this story.
| Sarge1264 chapter 13 . 6/22/2014
I reckon Balalaika went in to get Ethan and others as she owes Dutch a favour and appears to like Ethan not to mention the whole sister like friendship she had with Revy after all she could always have got hold of the guns some other way. (Although I suspect getting the weapons stolen from her would piss her off something rotten.) Anyway liked the chapter and absolutely love your story especially the detail you go into about the firearms used.
| Josh Spicer chapter 6 . 6/15/2014
Ahhh, so it was about the OC. Figured. Yeah, go figure, even if the story's good, one OC fucks everything up.
I may not be too high on OC's, but considering the small amount of fics for Black Lagoon I decided to bite the bullet and go for it.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/6/2014
Please update your hellsing story it is kick-ass.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/6/2014
Just read this story...and it is BADASS , and now I really want to read Ethan meeting Roberta.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/27/2014
Love it. The multiple personality is a nice touch. Please add sex scenes
| Gravenimage chapter 10 . 12/6/2013
| MrVemom10 chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
i dont see what there is to hate, i really hope that the flames dont stop you from writing because its really good ;-)