Reviews for Brightheart's Nightmare
Blossomstripe chapter 5 . 1/31/2013
I loved it! I'm reading your other storie!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
According to Battles of the clans/ Bluestar's prophecy, Swiftbreeze is a she cat, mother of Leopardfoot(mother to Tigerstar) and Pactchpelt, and Lionheart's mentor. I know canon Swiftpaw must have a a secret warrior name, but I just wanted you to know because I don't want people to get confused.
Tie-Dye Prince chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
Great Chapter! This is a great story, I forgot to tell you that I like the name Swiftbreeze.
Tie-Dye Prince chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I like this story too. I really liked Swiftpaw, sad that Erin Hunter killed him off, especially to such a gruesome death. Great story, update SOON!
TheWonderOfLexicon chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
Review my own story! More soon.
Shadowlily of MoonClan chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
HiddenClan
Hi, I was wondering if you might want to join.
Lily, Pebblestar of Hiddenclan
Friedchicken23 chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
Again, I love how vivid you made everything seem. I also like the idea of Brightpaw giving Swiftpaw his Warrior name. Please update soon :P

-Friedchicken23
Friedchicken23 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Good chapter, you have a lot of potential. It does seem a little jumpy, but you did a great job with describing things. The only problems I saw were a few typos and I think there was one sentence without punctuation at the end. But other than those small things, it was pretty well written. Keep up the good work!

-Friedchicken23