Reviews for Brightheart's Nightmare |
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![]() ![]() how did tiger claw die? |
![]() ![]() Its a pretty good story. But his name is not swiftbreeseyet |
![]() ![]() I loved it! I'm reading your other storie! |
![]() ![]() According to Battles of the clans/ Bluestar's prophecy, Swiftbreeze is a she cat, mother of Leopardfoot(mother to Tigerstar) and Pactchpelt, and Lionheart's mentor. I know canon Swiftpaw must have a a secret warrior name, but I just wanted you to know because I don't want people to get confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter! This is a great story, I forgot to tell you that I like the name Swiftbreeze. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story too. I really liked Swiftpaw, sad that Erin Hunter killed him off, especially to such a gruesome death. Great story, update SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Review my own story! More soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HiddenClan Hi, I was wondering if you might want to join. Lily, Pebblestar of Hiddenclan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, I love how vivid you made everything seem. I also like the idea of Brightpaw giving Swiftpaw his Warrior name. Please update soon :P -Friedchicken23 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, you have a lot of potential. It does seem a little jumpy, but you did a great job with describing things. The only problems I saw were a few typos and I think there was one sentence without punctuation at the end. But other than those small things, it was pretty well written. Keep up the good work! -Friedchicken23 |