I loved it! I'm reading your other storie!

According to Battles of the clans/ Bluestar's prophecy, Swiftbreeze is a she cat, mother of Leopardfoot(mother to Tigerstar) and Pactchpelt, and Lionheart's mentor. I know canon Swiftpaw must have a a secret warrior name, but I just wanted you to know because I don't want people to get confused.

Great Chapter! This is a great story, I forgot to tell you that I like the name Swiftbreeze.

I like this story too. I really liked Swiftpaw, sad that Erin Hunter killed him off, especially to such a gruesome death. Great story, update SOON!

Review my own story! More soon.

HiddenClan
Hi, I was wondering if you might want to join.
Lily, Pebblestar of Hiddenclan

Again, I love how vivid you made everything seem. I also like the idea of Brightpaw giving Swiftpaw his Warrior name. Please update soon :P

-Friedchicken23

Good chapter, you have a lot of potential. It does seem a little jumpy, but you did a great job with describing things. The only problems I saw were a few typos and I think there was one sentence without punctuation at the end. But other than those small things, it was pretty well written. Keep up the good work!

-Friedchicken23