Reviews for Heart of the City
Half Fortress Portal chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Wow, this is GREAT! I loved the descriptions and the detail and things like that you put in and I liked how you knew about the half life universe and how you can just write up such an amazing short story! But what I think you might want to improve on is make it an actual story! He could have survived the bullet in his back! Please, write more, I LOVE what you've written!
Quinn beirne chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Very god fanfic fun and cool please post more
iDOG chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Aw, man... This truly made me sad.