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Devrat chapter 1 . 4/14
Nice but some events were illogical.
Waldo Santiago chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
This was nice
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
I love it! Great story!
Andrien chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
MY HEART HURTS. I love this pairing so much, they are such presh babies. I think it's totally believable that they would have first bonded in that way after they've both basically been rejected. I loved the slow, simmering way you built their chemistry. I was waiting and waiting for them to kiss, but the waiting is part of the greatness! Thanks for contributing to an underrated pairing-I wish I could read a hundred stories you'd written about the two of them! (not so subtle begging)
BankruptSamurai chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
As a fan of Naruto/Ino above pretty much all else (others come close; but have never quite done the trick for me), this was fantastic. It was well written, I liked the implied pacing a lot, the idea of it being post-war fits all too well as it actually opened up the possibility for a realistic, believable romance and honestly - the scene with Ino and the Kyūbi just about made the fic.

Very sweet. Naruto's appropriately open and trusting of Ino and I liked your take on not only Ino's abilities (I will openly admit that I really like the idea of the Yamanaka clan - even moreso than the Uzumaki or Uchiha), but the obvious hints of being independent, highly capable and intelligent; as well as being capable enough to not be in bleeding-hearted awe of his ability to survive his own life (read far too many fanfics where the author's throw woe-is-me pity parties for canon Naruto to ever take them seriously enough to even consider liking them).

Well done. Certainly would not mind reading any Naruto- or Ino-centric stories of yours in the future. On that note, favoriting this under-favorited story of yours.
ZeronosVega chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
The Naruto/Ino pairing really is an interesting one. Normally, I would not think of putting the pair together, but this one-shot (oh how I wish it were longer) has convinced me otherwise. There really could be an interesting dynamic between the two. Unfortunately, there aren't many stories I've come across which features the pair. Speaking of, it might be a good idea to edit the character tags to possibly reflect that Ino and Naruto are a pairing. If anything, it'll allow users searching for said pairing an easier time.

During my reading, I stumbled across an error; a minor one. In the sentence, "And God, was is pitiful", I'm certain you meant "was it pitiful".

Anyway, thanks so much for such a lovely story. You were right, it was a story I could relate to, especially in the beginning.
AthenaSmile chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
A good NaruIno fic since i finished all less than 5000 words...
good job. (just wondering though, if she was that wounded when she visited Naruto that one night, was it okay for her to soak herself in warm water?...)
Neleothesze chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
I would have enjoyed a longer end sequence, especially since the whole story flowed so nicely but I guess beggars can't be choosers and I'm happy to have stumbled upon this little gem at all. :)

KrossWinter chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
NaruIno, in my opinion, is a rather difficult pairing to pull off, and pull off well. I typically don't read one shots, but this one piqued my interest enough. Glad I clicked the link. I like the evolution of the relationship you got going, as well as the character depth for a one shot. Well done.
DarkNamikaze chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
gonekrazy3000 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This was absolutely AMAZING! Please PLEASE write more NaruIno...
Preferably a multichapter or a sequel oneshot :D
Xo56oX chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This was so beautifully written and thought out, I never thought I would ever have such strong feelings about Naruto and Ino and you just proved me wrong.
Masilidon chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I really liked your story. It got so anxy that I had to stop to take a breath before diving back into the story.
Jacck1234 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Great work. I like it a lot. Espacially the part with Ino and Kurama.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Totally cute! Make more fics because this is a totally good one! ;)))) keep up the good work!
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