|Reviews for Sins of the Father|
| Reichenfaust chapter 16 . 3/27
So why is Goku all of a sudden at 1,100 when in chapter 11 he was 58,000?
| aLEX chapter 21 . 3/23
great story! and also great chapter!
YOU HAVE TO CHECK THE STORY 'Reprogrammed' IT'S AWESOME STORY!
AFTER YOU'L READ IT YOU WILL LOVED IT TOO!
| Daughter Of Vegeta chapter 21 . 2/24
Oh my goodness, I really am liking this story! I can't wait for the next chapter :D!
| Jedi Master Albus chapter 21 . 2/15
Great story so far, I really like how Goku has turned out in this with him having lost his memory and stuff.. This is the first that i've read with Goku being taken instead of Gohan. I think it works. I can't wait for the next chapter and hope it's soon.
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/1
I am actually kinda glad you decieded not to just cancel it. I support your choice in hopes that you will find your passion for it again! This is great story so I want to say thanks!
| Ty1000000 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
What happened to Goku rules 98?
| Taiwin chapter 21 . 11/18/2013
If you're going to cancel this story why not just do a rewrite?
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/18/2013
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/12/2013
Absolutely enjoyed this chapter! I seriously hope you continue updating this fic. All stories DO have to end eventually though...
If that ends up being your final decision at LEAST give it an awesome ending. WAY too many great fanfics start and get left forever unfinished.
Couldn't put in a signed review this chapter for some reason.
| audosi chapter 21 . 11/11/2013
nooooooooooooooooooooooo right when i start reading one of THE best fanfics out there it cancells NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
| jomama25 chapter 21 . 11/11/2013
nooo! dont go!
| lazerbem chapter 21 . 11/5/2013
This story is so good. It would be cool if Bojack and his gang show up, just because they used the Galactic Lords of the universe. I doubt it will happen though as even Kogu could turn Frieza to ash with a finger-snap, never-mind Bojack
| FinalFlashX chapter 21 . 10/30/2013
So...I really only want to talk about one thing for this review, and I'll really only talk about it since it was the BIG point of this chapter. Turles' sudden switch from "Not-Giving-A-Fuck" Saiyan who didn't give a shit about the Saiyans' "Honor/Pride" Code to being President of the Society of Fairness. This...this...this is a complete 180 in terms of characterization! Like...Turles shouldn't just flip that radically in one fight, from one simple interference from Nappa! Like...WTF! Wasn't Turles just giving a monologue about how Saiyan Honor was stupid like, last chapter; which in story time is like 30 minutes at most! Like seriously, I have no idea how you can justify such a radical shift in character so quickly! Like, it literally happened in a matter of minutes that Turles has this change of heart, that hasn't happen in his entire life until this point. I know why you did it too, so that Vegeta could live, and there could be a way he was defeated but then still live when facing Turles. To be honest, I would much rather have Turles stick to his as presented until this chapter characterization and mercilessly execute Vegeta after Nappa's help. I think it would have showed the fault's in Vegeta's own ideology of not needing anyone except for his own strength and power, and not needing anyone else's help, while also making Turles and Nappa more credible as villains along with throwing in a game changing plot twist! But no, instead you decide to just completely 180 a character. Doesn't make a lot of sense, and to be honest I'm fairly disappointed.
The sad part is that the rest of the chapter was great! The fight scenes between Vegeta and Turles were once again excellent! They had just the right amount of suspense, surprises, and back-forth action that's absolutely phenomenal to read! When Nappa jumped in at the last moment, I was taken off guard and was stunned by the sudden ending to a great battle, but it was an appropriate one. It made sense, and it was just the right twist to the end fight and would have helped highlight Turles' character of "Willing to do anything to Win" mentality which would have been a great foil to Vegeta and many of the other protagonist characters in the story. Instead, the entire scenario and chapter, no: even the whole Turles vs. Vegeta dynamic that has been in play from Chapter 5-6 til now has been completely ruined by this. Like...I haven't been befuddled like this sense the "Nappa survived his head being spilt in two" thing. That's another thing! Nappa should absolutely HATE Vegeta at this point! Honestly, I could see Nappa just not listening to his Righteous Turles and just returning the favor and curb stomping his skull in. I mean, I thought Nappa's whole purpose in living now was to get revenge against Vegeta for betraying him? Why wouldn't he fulfill that revenge when given the perfect opportunity?
All in all, very disappointing ending to what was such a GREAT fight before it. Really hoping that these kind of things are avoided from now on and I can't wait to see Gohan finally take over as the main character.
| FinalFlashX chapter 20 . 10/30/2013
Hey there Rott, it's been a long time (again), but I'm finally cracking down and getting caught up on my reviewing! As such, unfortunately, the reviews will be fairly short until I get all the way caught up and can get back to my more in-depth preference of reviewing. As compensation, if you have anything you want to specifically hear about in the chapter than PM and I'll be happy to go in-depth with you about it! Alright, Review Time!
As you once expressed to me in a private conversation, you're ability to write fighting scenes has vastly improved. Round 2 of Turles vs. Vegeta was very engaging and extremely well-paced. It was easy to picture in my mind as I followed along with the action and it extremely suspenseful as I had no idea who would come out victorious in this fight since you have expressed enjoying the character of Turles and the same can't be said for Vegeta. And it seems that Turles is poised to pull out a victory here, but of course, you left a cliffhanger instead of actually showing the killing blow. You tease! Very well done, a very engaging scene indeed and I enjoyed the banter/dialogue between the two in the battle.
Skipping ahead to the Goku scene (because really, nothing happened in the Goten birth scene), I particularly enjoyed the characterization of Frieza in this scene, since you have very IC dialogue for him that really shows off his sadistic and sarcastic sense of humor. Great job there, and while the fight wasn't as good as Turles v. Vegeta, it was still pretty descent and I you did a good job of showing the 2 on 1 dynamic. Though, it didn't really help Raditz and Goku out much. I would talk about power levels, but I've already stated views on how I didn't particularly care for how much stronger everyone is from a couple more sparring session (Biggest question for me here is why isn't Vegeta, Raditz, and Nappa in the millions if they were able to increase this much in a year. They've had like 20 before now! Why didn't they improve then!) but honestly, it's not a big deal. An engaging plot and interesting characters is far more important than tiny logistical details like that and I'd much rather you focus on those two things than the debatable workings of power levels.
I liked how you showed a more childish, immature side of Gohan-since it's a thing a lot of authors forget when writing him. He is only like, five at this point in time. He can't be expected to be a bonafide scholar already, even if he is a genius. So Tien and Gohan are heading to Namek soon, it will be interesting to see how that will play out. Anyways, good chapter, time to read and review the next one!
| mfmxxx chapter 21 . 10/21/2013
Its good but calling the baby Goten in different circumstances of Goku being gone seems a little unrealistic, I think the name is too close to Goku to be chosen tbh