Reviews for Helpless
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2017
Good job with the characterization! Especially the bantering between Arthur and Merlin. Those two are simply the worst (best)! :D

Oh, and the whole 'clay doll' thing was a really good idea. I haven't seen that plot point all that often . . . oh, and I like how you managed to write the whole story without giving the witch a name. Interesting. :)

queenofmoondoorswife chapter 8 . 1/23/2017
great! Really enjoyed this!
DragonGirl725 chapter 8 . 12/29/2016
Great story!
Aaviaria chapter 8 . 7/1/2016
I just had to say, fantastic story! I loved it and I loved how the characters felt right, like that was exactly what I imagined they say or do! Just brilliant!
CreativeWing chapter 8 . 8/4/2015
Most satisfying story that I've read yet. Although I would like a little more whump I love how you acually finished the story, with a beautiful and a that-makes-me-smile ending. I highly congratulate you on writing a successful first story and encourage you to keep it up. Best wishes to you and your inspiration.

DragonReader99 chapter 8 . 7/16/2015
I loved it!
HannahDelaware123321 chapter 8 . 8/31/2014
This was a great story! enjoyed reading it! thankyou for the diffrent wump story, totally diffrent from others i have read! good job!
xBookEaterx chapter 8 . 10/17/2013
MugetsuPipefox chapter 8 . 8/23/2013
Hahaha! Loved the ending. Way to ruin the moment, Merlin. But, then, I guess Arthur would feel like his manliness was at stake if they continued with all those girl feelings XD
Great job!
MugetsuPipefox chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
Yay Freya 3
So sad that they couldn't even hold hands or anything. But, they'll get to be together again one day. Which is a nice thought. Great job! Lots of happy people shall be in the next chapter :3
MugetsuPipefox chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
Noooo Kilgaragh! *cries* He's not allowed to die! Not in the show and not here! At least you didn't actually say he died. Now I can insert my own mental imaginary version and pretend it never happened.
Go Arthur and knights! Find Merlin! Doing really well :)
MugetsuPipefox chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
Yes! Go Kilgarragh! Man that dragon is so cool XD
Great chapter!
MugetsuPipefox chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Oh noes! How can they fight an enemy who could kill him at any moment?! So exciting XD
Wake up, Merlin!
MugetsuPipefox chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
Reminds me of Servant of Two Masters. Loved that episode. I wonder if Arthur will find his release suspicious... Looking forward to the next one!
MugetsuPipefox chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
*sigh* they never can have a feast or celebration without someone trying to ruin it. Oh well, makes for an interesting read XD
Great job on the first chapter. I'm in agreement that the final episode made me sad -3-. But that's what fan fiction's for :) Keep up the great work!
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