|Reviews for Schneeflocke|
| Littwink chapter 2 . 8/12/2016
Just, wow. Your writing is fantastic! Though at first, I was uncertain about whether Jack actually had a mental illness or if Pitch was using that as a basis for emotional dependency. Anyways, I can imagine this happening— not Pitch helping Jack but Jack becoming unstable with a hundred plus years of solitude. Looking forward to reading more of this!
| sakurahan chapter 6 . 8/1/2016
OH NO poor Jack is with the guardians. I Really REALLY hope Pitch can get him back. I love how pitch cares about Jacks well being and how Jack thinks of pitch like a father I dont want to see that go away ;A; this is the only fanfic I could find that has pitch acting like a dad and actually caring about Jack PLEASE tell me Jack ans Pitch will get back together without the Guardians messing up how Jack sees Pitch. I would be heart broken if I saw Jack turn agenst Pitch amd kill him. Cant eveyone just try to get along. To be honest the man in the moon and Guardians piss me off sometimes. In some stories they act so highly of themself amd completely neglected all the other spirits that would like to be believed in D: for example Jack now. Because of moon and there neglect Jack is all messed up ;A; Pitch was there for him ;-; took care of him keeped him safe that more the the Moon or Guardians ever did for him. So PLEASE PLEASE make Jack and Pitch stay safe and be together again.
| RiseoftheSoulGuardians chapter 11 . 4/26/2016
Please update this story. It's a really great story.
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Can you please please please please please please please please please please please please, continue this absolutely AMAZING story!? It's so enthralling and I wish this were a publised work, because I'd buy and read the heck out of that! You are a brilliant weaver of words, don't let anyone discourage you or tell you otherwise!
| Mystearica 'Primal' Fende chapter 11 . 10/11/2015
Amritsar Massacre...is it the Jallinahwalla Bagh Massacre you're talking about? That part I caught at the mention of the chapter name, though I didn't understand how you mentioned 'The battle of Amritsar'. The inclusion of the sentence confused me...try to explain?
Ooh, superb story BTW!
| Wienerfest chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
did he see nightlight or something like wow those visions dont leave a lot to go by man
anyway aw poor babyyy :c
| Kaylen Cooper chapter 11 . 4/26/2015
This is way awesome! :D
So can't wait to read more. Loving the detail you have brought to this world. :)
| ben123456123 chapter 11 . 3/17/2015
OH MY GOSH FATHERLY PITCH IS AMAZING! More please!
| inabsurd chapter 11 . 8/13/2014
Update please, this is gorgeous!
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/19/2014
*slow claps* my brain has information in it. This is very educating.
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 11 . 3/17/2014
once again i love this tory so much i cant wait for the next chapters! it is such a good story
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 10 . 3/17/2014
love it so much you make me love the story even more as i read it
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 9 . 3/17/2014
love it so good whats the loki story called
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 8 . 3/17/2014
love it such an amazing story im not even finished reading it and i must say i recomend everyone read it its a crazy awesome story
| thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
once gain i love this story so much excited for him ton see pitch again im getting really excited to find out what happens