Reviews for New Dawn
SpencerDorman chapter 9 . 11/9/2016
Can't wait for more updates!
SpencerDorman chapter 7 . 11/9/2016
I'm curious, how is it possible for Percy to choke on water? He did so in this chapter, after he spit his water out on Nico after hearing about his parents' funeral being soon. Also, since he is blessed by Zeus, shouldn't he be immune to electricity? He's been shocked by Thalia since being blessed, which I don't understand. With his blessing from Hestia/Hephaestus he is immune to fire, so shouldn't his blessing from Zeus make him immune to electricity?
Guest chapter 9 . 8/5/2016
pleaseupdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate yo
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 9 . 3/26/2015
This is seriously awesome! It could be its own book with the plot and everything. Keep it up, I greatly look forward to more.
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 2 . 3/26/2015
WHITEOUT180 chapter 9 . 2/14/2015
Update update UPDATE! !
Fizzy2310 chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
Please update! I loooooooove this!
Starriewonders317 chapter 9 . 12/31/2013
Great prophecy oh and i think i know what prophecy is saying update soon
Fen the Dragon chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
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Sparky chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
I notice that you have the same voice for each character. You need to change it up. The casuals like Percy and Thalia are too formal and the formals like the gods are too casual. Make each character unique, just like you would change a tone of voice for each character in a book you were reading out loud. Sorry if I didn't make sense or offended you. Just tryin to help
Keep It Lowkey chapter 9 . 7/21/2013
Great story. The only thing that's bugging me is that you still haven't had Percy ask about the kids coming from the Hestia cabin and I need to know what the deal is! Lol
aesir21 chapter 9 . 7/20/2013
awesome chapter and great idea on prophesy. i am happy that Percy and Thalia are together and almost have a kid together
harryginny9 chapter 9 . 7/16/2013
Time Sea Sky Primordial chapter 2 . 7/16/2013
As I was reading the chapter, I thought of a Katana for Percy's sword.
Forgotpassword chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Usually I'm StygianScrewdriver, but I can't remember my password. It's a good story, but I wish you could have used Reyna...But, oh well. I like the fact that you didn't put too much animosity between Percy and Annabeth, but there needs to be some dissention in the ranks...just a suggestion.
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