|Reviews for Infinite|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
And the OC is now the main character that is wooing over everybody...
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Sigh, I knew this would if happened. The OC is better then the main character...
I'm sorry but happens eveytime in fanfiction and completely annoys
| Strovist chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Hi, nice interpretation of what the story might be like if the LN continues. I think you might want to correct this 'People need to learn ow to share there siblings', i think you are trying to say 'People need to learn how to share their siblings' right?
| FeartheMightyToothpick chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Can I give you an OC?
His Name is Luke Lincoln. He's from Ireland, so I guess he could be their representative. He has short messy golden brown hair, sharp forest green eyes, medium brow, a strong jaw, and a blackened scar across the back of his neck.
Luke is a mechanical genius, but not in the same way as other geniuses. He has a powerful research method: constant vigilance, risk everything, Look EVERYWHERE. He is much more creative in his theory research, so that he gathers plausible theories from the most ridiculous things- places NOBODY else would care to look. Luke is a modest boy most places, but he gets a bit arrogant in the workshop.
His personal IS is called Force Nova, and is a very dark green, almost Black, with white energy and rust orange highlights. the legs resemble a wolves, only more upright. the hands resemble a large dragon's claw on the left, and a knight's gauntlet on the right. it has wing boosters that resemble a warped vortex, and it's headgear looks like a Native American Chieftain crown, only dark green with Orange, and shorter. Luke Designed and built Force Nova himself(for the most part-not the Core).
It can generate condensed rapid fire energy beams of various degrees from the left hand and it has something similar to Ichika's sword(only with two 'Rails') that it can wield in the other. The Force Nova also has a boost mode called the Glory Star, in which the energy is so condensed the suit shines bright gold and forest green that enables the user to go up to Mach 5(Is that too much? if so, mach 1 or 2), that the attacks are Conductive, the attacks are much stronger. Also, a plasma booster pack in the feet and wings for acrobatic dodging/nimble dashing.
Force Nova's most powerful weapon is a hidden Railgun installed into the sword, that cannot be stopped by a forcefield, but can be dodged if you see it coming soon enough (it's FAST), or blocked by a shield(but you still take quite a bit of damage depending on how strong the shield is). The railgun is Force Nova's last resort, as the power output required will shut down the systems after the second or third shot until Force Nova achieves Second shift(if it ever does).
| Code-Emperor07 chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
i like the story. Keep it up and PLZ update soon.
| lajoie21 chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
good chapter. Chifuyu is the theorical type of teacher and tabane is the pratical type of teacher. i think the student gonna learn more with tabane on the field. when the next ?
| lajoie21 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
good chapter. tabane teacher of course. the second year gonna be interesting. when the next?
| Kosuke-Dono chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
Keep it up..
| uub chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
pretty good i liked the fight between cyrus & ichika. though i wonder who will you pair them with or are you going with the harem setting by giving cyrus his own harem ( wink wink nudge lol)
| uub chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
looks interesting hope you update soon
| Mzr90 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
All around interesting start I did notice some grammar/spelling mistakes though and I'm looking forward to Cyrus' history and why he uses the IS.