Reviews for My Story: Noelle Pax
Guest chapter 3 . 10/13/2014
this is like my OC Pj's story she was abandoned by her parents in the nevada desert as an infant and was found and adopted by Optimus Prime and Arcee. She her adoptive parents and brother Bumblebee live on an island that nobody else has seen (like Nims Island). She has animal friends on the island and people from other islands. When she was 12 her parents found another human baby and took him in to. She is now 16 her little brother Cayden is 4 and Bee is 18. none of the other auto bots know of her, her family, or the island. Optimus says she can't meet the other auto bots and they can never know of her or Cayden because its to dangerous. The other bots don't even know that Optimus and Arcee are Sparkmates and Bumblebee is their son. Pj has friends on surrounding islands which she rides a whale to visit them. And finally they live on a island because of the decepticons and Pj has superpowers she has Jet Stream and Laylays powers from Sky high and summers powers from Zoom
bladewolfzic chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
love the story
Lady Minuialwen chapter 14 . 5/14/2013
Sweet
Lady Minuialwen chapter 13 . 5/14/2013
Sad
Lady Minuialwen chapter 12 . 5/14/2013
Awwww poor Noelle
Lady Minuialwen chapter 10 . 5/14/2013
:3
Lady Minuialwen chapter 9 . 5/14/2013
Wonder what the necklace is
Lady Minuialwen chapter 8 . 5/14/2013
oh no!
Lady Minuialwen chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
:D Nice
Lady Minuialwen chapter 6 . 5/14/2013
Good :)
Lady Minuialwen chapter 5 . 5/14/2013
Awwww
Lady Minuialwen chapter 4 . 5/14/2013
:) good
Lady Minuialwen chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
:D
Lady Minuialwen chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
Great chapter
Lady Minuialwen chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Great :)
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