Reviews for I'll Bet You
crickee-the-yaoi-fan chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
loved this!
Caracu chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
much better than strip poker.. wahaha 3
claire m chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
The difference between hate and lust should be drawn out more, the part where they get drunk together was good, helped with the transformation of hate into lust. A lot more detail of male love making was good.
AllenMoyashiWalker chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
haha, love it XD
Becca2793 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Haha this one was great as well :) the whole time in the beginning I was just like, "Oh Kanda baby...you're so dumb sometimes." I love making Kanda stupid about relationships. Its so easy and perfect lol.

The only critique I have is for the sex scene. I just think it moved kind of fast - straight from kissing to Kanda bending Allen over. Then again, this may come from a personal bias. I do enjoy a good foreplay, and I like to think that all the stuff that comes before penetration is just as important as that final act. I think its more realistic. Again, though, this could just be me lol. I still thought it was pretty fuckin hot :)

Loved it - keep up the great work
mitsuyo-chan chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Allen ... such a flirt ;)
yullenai chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
IT'S SO DETAILED AND PERFECT , i could picture everything. toma's awkwardness is so hilarious XD.