Reviews for The Hunt Begins
eveyssoul chapter 12 . 2/27
The four of them sitting in the snow was funny and cute! Scar not liking chocolate just doesn't compute to a chocolate lover like me! Lol...poor Ali she broke down finally. The hug was needed too bad he doesn't understand human emotions.
eveyssoul chapter 10 . 2/27
Good character development. And yes Celtic is a hottie and I eould cuddle! Though Scar is my fave bae! Lol
eveyssoul chapter 7 . 2/26
This was all types of cuteness! I want a Celtic for myself! She surprised me here in a good way with sharing food, water and showing gim what to do. )
eveyssoul chapter 2 . 2/25
She is a pampered spoiled immature ungrateful girl. Lol I would have sent her to boarding school.
TheGalaxeus chapter 13 . 3/18/2017
Great story. Feel like the Abomination will be making an appearance.
TheGalaxeus chapter 12 . 3/18/2017
Interesting developments. Scar doesn't like sweets.
TheGalaxeus chapter 3 . 3/17/2017
Please don't let Terminator be dead!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/13/2016
Okay, the thought of Ci'tde and Skl're picking on one another over the candy was freaking hilarious. I had to read it three times before I was satisfied.
PLEASE! I've read both stories! Please tell me you're working on the third installment! I am a seamstress; I will bribe you with a plushie if it'll help motivate you!
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Gonna save part two
K9Train chapter 3 . 3/4/2016
'Terminator' is just so damn loveable, isn't he? Lord, he really took all the focus away for me, what a sweetie!
Yunnora Lovespell chapter 13 . 8/25/2015
I absolutely loved this fic. I was upset when Chulonte died, I had hoped there was going to be more of him, but definitely fell in love with Ci'tde. I loved the scenery you put them in, it was very descriptive so I could really imagine their surroundings. I appreciated the character development, especially in Elaina. I loved that she was a flawed character and while she still had certain aspects that made her-her, she did over come obstacles that led to earning that blooded warrior mark; and she didn't have to become such a badass to do it either. The ending was bittersweet but fitting. I look forward to reading the next part to this story. Again, I loved this story. Great read!
Kim chapter 2 . 8/16/2015
I really have to say, so far I HATE Elaina. Her character just *screams* bratty teen-age girl. Whether or not this was intentional, I don't know. If it was, you must be an amazing author because she is insufferable as hell. I'm looking forward to some time of character development, because it would be a damn shame if she remains to be a one-dimensional OC.

Your writing itself is well done, it's really just your OC that gets on my damn nerves.
sisterawesomeness chapter 13 . 5/25/2015
I just read this entire story and I loved it! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read your sequel.
NymphettEcho chapter 13 . 4/16/2015
Yay! I LOVED it :D *fangirl scream* Scar and Celtic are such hearthrobs! Thank you so much for your fanfic and for not only making both guys live, but also making it all so believable. I will continue on to the next installment of this epic tale. . .

Come back to me Celtic!
NymphettEcho chapter 8 . 4/15/2015
Oh my ghoul xD I really love your story. I still can't believe Terminator is dead - or Hans as I called him in my head. The Crunch bar memory really stabbed at my heart. But the last two chapters have made me squeal and shout in laughter - I just had to comment :D Thank you for your hard work!
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