Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heir of Slytherin
Vipera411 chapter 3 . 1/21/2014
Why do people think red hair wouldn't go with green robes? Redheads can look great in green clothing. Check it out instead of just assuming it wouldn't work. Personally, I think the Weasley hair looks garish in Gryffindor robes, especially Quidditch ones - redness overload.

And I agree, the Seeker makes the rest of the players almost worthless, except in some relatively rare circumstances when one team's Chasers are completely dominant. Quidditch would be better if the Snitch was only worth about 50-70 points (rather than abolished altogether, which would alter the game too much). Then the Seeker would still be important, but the rest of the game would also be far more meaningful, and more tactical as well.
Vipera411 chapter 6 . 1/21/2014
Ugh. I can't stand moRon Weasley. I hope he has a close encounter with some Acromantula at some point. Maybe Harry could somehow smuggle one out of the maze at the end of book four...
EmeraldStorm7 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
So I am really interested to see what Draco says when Harry tells him about Dobby. I think Harry will tell him, he told Ron. I knew Vernon could never get one up on Lucius, and it was hilarious what Lucius managed to do to the oaf. Excited to see how things go in the Manor!

Great start!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
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sasha1213 chapter 5 . 12/13/2013
Nice chapter, as usually. In particular, I love Harry and Pansy interaction - very sweet.
sasha1213 chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Awesome chapter. Funny thing is why Harry have never read all about last war, Voldemort and his parents. Maybe he read something, I hope so, but basic information (including their Hogwarts background) about his parents must be in every book about him, and he defiantly should read at least one just out of curiosity. But yeah, whatever.
David-El chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
It is interesting symbolism, although, for the war, how effective would either be if the entire side was destroyed? As effective as a Seeker would be trying to win the game when everyone else on the team is incompetent. Besides, a GOOD Quidditch captain would do his/her best to eliminate the other Seeker so that their team could rack up enough points that the Snitch is useless. Not impossible, just difficult.
Dragonjek chapter 16 . 10/29/2013
Marvelous. Simply marvelous.

Slytherin Harry is always something to enjoy, especially when the author doesn't automatically make him dark and edgy as soon as the first syllables come out of that hat. Harry's ignorance to the darker side of magical society-the Death Eaters and the extent of prejudice against mudbloods, mainly-is enjoyable to read about, and I really look forwards to seeing how he responds to the revelations over the course of the series.

Also, I hope he spends more time with Tracey and Daphne.

Moving on to the next story,,,
Sir Chris chapter 14 . 10/27/2013
I am adding you to my favorites list because you are the first person I have seen to make Harry have the snake obey him. A life long fanfiction dream has been fulfilled.
Sir Chris chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
Reading through these but I have to agree: this was one of my favorite chapters as well. Harry is cunning but still himself.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
It could be a combination of both: to reveal the wizarding world's lack of common sense AND commentary on how some view sports as absurd.

Moving on:
You need to go through your stories and re-read them and proof them. You are leaving out key words. Not often, but about 4 or 5 times per story.
Slytherin Potter chapter 7 . 10/25/2013
I'm a new follower great work with this story
Blitzstrahl chapter 3 . 10/4/2013
Professor Snape's voice cut across the common room. "Potter, Davis!"

"Yes, sir?"

"Show the first year students to their dormitories."

Foreshadowing who gets Prefect by any chance?
pkp033 chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
I read your first installment all in one go, and completed the Heir of Slytherin in the same fashion.

I'm really enjoying what you've built here. I like how you gloss over canon points but focus on the parts that are important to character development. I can't wait to read more! Good luck!
Lightsbane1905 chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
You can fly, what's not to like?

I will grant you that I would prefer it to be more racing than on a course than tossing and ball grabbing...heh
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