|Reviews for Exclusive|
| oh meh gawd chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
This is sooooooo gooooooooooood! Im SOOOO reading more by you! It turned into that, but THAT was AMAZING!
| Post U Later chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
That, Was, Fucking, HOT! OMG I'm Sweating That Was So Hot! Truly Amazing Writing! I LOVE IT! XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I actually enjoyed this one, aside from one I couldn't spot any grammar or spell ing errors, which makes it better. The fact that these two remain in character(well as much as one would expect considering what they're doing), is a huge plus.
You did better than I would expect with your description of sex, all thou if you wish to write porn you should try adding even more detail, don't be bothered even if it seems long. If you can't think of details to add, do some research, I don't mean just watching or reading porn from pros, but also just studying sex. Just read about anal sex on some of those sites that tell how to have it safely, also recommend reading blow job tips written by some gay guy, that can help learning about the sensitivities of the male organ.
I would like to point out that in the sentence ''-the darkness in Dean turns him on almost as much as the lightness in him does.'' 'lightness' is nonsense, it should be ''-the light in him does.''
| Maknatuna chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Awesome and hot like hell :)
| precious1075 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Not sure how you feel about it, but I LOVED IT! SEXY AND HOT AND KINKY. JUST DAMN! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
| Castiel'sLyingTechnique chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Unique! love it :)
| Riley chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I feel like you should just write all of the Destiel fics. Like, we should send these to Misha and wait for him to talk about them.
| Ryane-Foxx chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
:D there's not a damn thing wrong with this! It was nose-bleed & wet dream worthy :) at least I think so ;) you make me love this pairing like no other ever has & I really liked this xD especially the ending, hope there's a sequel where they do work on Cas' bedroom vocab :) thanks for posting!
| snowin' you chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I didn‘t know what to expect from reading the summary, but this is quite good actually.
| 0DestielForever0 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I'M IN LOVE. This is probably one of my favorite fanfic's I've ever read. Amazing detail and very sexy. I love how you stuck to how the characters would initially act during certain scenes. The innocence of Castiel is frustratingly beautiful. Great job. c: It would be cool if you actually turned it into a story with several chapters. Thanks for posting this.
| sd4ianto chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I love Dean and Castiel together!