Reviews for jasons journey
afred chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
my apologies i wasnt talking about the 2 posters in the bottum i was talking about a insultive review that i deleted sorry for the misunderstanding
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Apparently you have a problem with constructive criticism.

Simply put, you need to improve your writing before publishing. As it stands now, it's unreadable.
afred chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Well you sir are a fucking queer apparently your mom never fucking loved you it's weird really I know more things then you and actually get a account and or are you a coward and no I'm not going to respect those he disrespects me so kill yourself
Superhero geek chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
it's great for the most part. its kinda hard to understand becuase you didn't use quotation marks.
Onimiman chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
yeh, one problem to this; try to make this readable with paragraphs.