|Reviews for Saints Row Fourever|
| MisterMagic25 chapter 16 . 10/7/2013
Whenever you do come back i know its going to continue to be good
Keep doing what you do and come back when you can
| Sierra chapter 16 . 9/2/2013
Wow, awesome story. Really hope you keep writing it!
| Fox chapter 16 . 6/8/2013
Holy shit, I just read this for 2 1/2 hours and all i can say is keep doing this. I was rather skeptical of the kind of fanfics coming from saints row ( I typically read skyrim, wow, and other assorted titles) but this is amazing. The worst part is, is that I can see this as SR4 if they decided to get serious. My little gibberish aside, i wanted to point out a couple of things. the first is that i think your spelling maneuver wrong, (unless your British, they have weird spellings) and the second is that i feel Gats character is thrown in at awkward times. Even though he is supposed to be dead, a better flow with him would be better.
| SaintsRow4Ever chapter 16 . 4/13/2013
Why? WHY? WHY! I screamed when I saw it was updated, but realised it was an update! First world problems.. D: Good luck with exams! Excitded for the next chapter. :)
| SaintChubbs chapter 15 . 4/3/2013
Number one, I have been waiting for chapter 16 for forever so... Is it possible to say something like, "Oh yes I am still working on chapter 16 of Saints Row Fouerever." Or something like that, I just want to know if you are still working on it. And if you aren't... PLEASE CONTINUE IT IS REALLY GOOD AND DRAMATIC!
| BOB chapter 15 . 3/20/2013
Last paragraph confusing story is AWESOME! PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING!
| BOB chapter 11 . 3/19/2013
IM CRYING ON THE INSIDE:(
| BOB chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
THIS STUFF IS AMAZING!
| SaintsRow4Ever chapter 15 . 3/11/2013
Descriptions were really nice in this chapter, I like Shaundi's struggle to go to Stalicost and defeat Quiver once and for all. She really deserves it, you portray her in a brilliant yet believable way. I just feel so sorry for her after what happened. Shaundi's dialogue is very well written, it's exactly what she would talk like in the game.
Having the Saints become this Syndicate kind of gang is really cool, since there's like a gang in each city. It's just gonna be so weird not seeing the Boss, Pierce and Shaundi kicking ass by each others side. It would be cool if you wrote a bit about Shaundi worrying Pierce because she knows Gat can die anyone can, the same with Pierce.
I was thrilled when Tobias came into the room, it was like "YES! YES! YES!" Favourite moment ever, lol. Characters like Ben King, Luis, Tobias and Donnie defiantly need more attention, that's why they are all gonna be in Skyfall. It's really funny with Zimos being scared, even in the Third I kind of knew he was kind of old and I don't think he can defend himself that well. I also gotta mention I LOVE the way you don't make Shaundi the weak one always getting captured, thanks for not making her like that.
Lian Chang, my favourite character yet! Oh, I love how she isn't shy, but doesn't talk much. It was nice of her to help out Zimos and it shows she is defiantly a nice person. In this chapter you proved she was loyal by her bowing and stuff, small stuff like that just changes stuff for the better. Razor kind of seemes like the funny one, kind of reminds me of Troy..
Oh yeah! Troy, I can't WAIT till he is back. I know it's gonna be good. Josh if really funny and Tobias' attitude to Jenny is hilarious. She's so easy to wind up and get mad. I really love how you brought Burt Reynolds back into this, and judging by his talking it sounds like Steelport is in serious shit. I loved the way you made Pierce miss Shaundi, those two are like brother and sister lol.
The dialogue is amazing, descriptions are flawless, and the plot is perfect. Keep going, this is amazing and I cannot wait for the next chapter, I have high hopes!
| SaintsRow4Ever chapter 14 . 3/11/2013
Oh.. I feel so bad for Stan. I still don't like him, but I still feel somewhat sorry for him. You really gripped my emotions and this chapter and made me feel bad for someone I don't even like, you've gotta be skilled to do something like that. I guess this makes the Boss even more eager to kill Edgar according to the last, amazing, line.
I really enjoyed this story, keep going. :)
| androidsasa chapter 8 . 3/3/2013
I dont even know what to say this time, I feel so bad for Shaundi.
| androidsasa chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
I love that. Just got beat to sh!t and kidnapped, but still happy. This is great, I'm running out of things to say. I feel that I keep repeating myself, but I can't say more. It is definitely getting better with each chapter, though.
| androidsasa chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
I was kinda hoping that the hooded figure was Angel and he'd finally came through, but oh well. Again, I really any express how much this... I just freaking love it. You really are a talented writer, I think.
Another intense chapter, thanks. Now, I read on.
| androidsasa chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
I gotta say, I'm proud of the boss there. Even when he had his chane to hit back, he kept calm and let Angel talk. I don't really like Angel, to be honest, and he already humiliated Killbane. Like Viola said, he's nothing without his mask, so isn't that worse than being dead? Ah, well.
Anyways, your writing almost (I reaaally don't like him) made me feel a little sorry for him when he wasn't using the boss as a punching bag, so that's got to be a good sigh, eh? Like I've said before, the descriptions are great. And the fact that you don't go into too much detail is good also, it's FanFiction and we're talking about a scene from the game/movie/book, we already know the place. Some writers detail it too much and that's all I can think.
| androidsasa chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
Again, every thing was top notch on the grammar side and there are no complaints on your descriptions. Pierce is my favourite character, and, for now at least, still is in your story, he's a tually quite wise. Like an old man. Keep this up, and this could be one of the best.
Anyway, the confrontation! What we all would've loved to see on the actual game. I for one would've loved to fight Angel, just for fun, nothing bad had to happen. I am gonna shut up now and read on.