Reviews for Our Story
LittleBlackbirdie chapter 27 . 8/14/2013
Awesome as always please update soon!
xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 27 . 8/14/2013
Nice chapter. i really missed this story, I'm glad it's back.
And have fun in Hawaii!
xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Please keep writing. This is very good.
xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 26 . 6/29/2013
Love the chapter!
Imtellingmyfatheraboutthis chapter 25 . 6/28/2013
Fsbsisnsk... That didnt break my heart or anything... Oh no... maybe... I need to know what happens next! It was so sad! :'( we worship u ;)
xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 25 . 6/28/2013
Please let there be Fannie in the next chapter.
thanx
Ani Teen Lyoko chapter 24 . 6/27/2013
OMG! I wasn't expecting that! The Jase part I mean, because it was obvious that Annie was going to get choosen, but Jase? I don't like him or hate him, it's just that it's a big surprise (at last for me), I love your story and your fast uploads :) And sorry if I made any gramatical mistake :S
xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 23 . 6/26/2013
I hope Annie's not going to get reaped. But I think she wil...
Please let Fannie get toghter soon.
love the story!
JustDon'tFlickrrr chapter 23 . 6/25/2013
poor Finn and poor Annie! i hate snow nothing made me happier then the day he and coin died
LittleBlackbirdie chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I looooooooooove this!
Imtellingmyfatheraboutthis chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Hiya!
I'm ashamed to confess this is the first hg fanfic I've read... I can't stop reading HP ones! This was really brilliant! You've understood all the characters really well and I like the way u display Annie... It's really interesting. The brilliant thing about with this is ( I guess this applies to the majority of fanfics- apart from future ones...) the reader knows what is going to happen and what the story is but uve done 2 (these were the most clear to me anyway...)things which has made this such a fascinating read for me, whilst still knowing these characters fates; poetic licence! ... In the books it is a little vague as to what happens, leaving room for the readers to imagine and develop ideas about their past... U have done this mega fantastically! Secondly you look at their past and you get to learn how- In your perspective- the games have destroyed them by making us learn about their once innocent childhoods growing more sinister faster than it should...
I know what's going to happen with Annie but Im still desperate to find out what happens with Annie, if that makes any sense...
One thing, sometimes ur grammar n spelling stuff isn't Always perfect... You occasionally have an auxiliary verb in one tense and the verb in another... I think you'd notice that tho, I don't think ur grammar's bad... Tho I think this review is riddled with bad grammar and spelling mistakes coz I'm probably typing badly and the txt predictor isn't predicting rite :S
Anyway loved these! Sorry I think I wrote quite a boring review... Ill try and do more exited reviews like my normal 12 yr old self! Bibi!
xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 21 . 6/23/2013
That was cute!
bloodredbutterfly15 chapter 17 . 6/20/2013
Good story , keep on writing
Ani Teen Lyoko chapter 14 . 3/8/2013
Hi! I love this story! And I'm wishing this is the 5 rewiev so yo would update the new chapter! This fic is AWSOME
KaitlovesFinnick chapter 14 . 2/21/2013
OMGG SOOOO GOOD
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