Reviews for Goodbye Forever, Till Tomorrow
The Toast Ninja chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
So sad:( but I really think you captured perfectly how this went down, good job
Misty's pysduck chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
I really liked that. Great job.
FemaleShank chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
This nearly brought me to tears. Excellent character capturing, and beautiful writing. :)
Won'tforgetcanregret chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This is so beautiful and sad and I love it.
Randomcat100 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Guest Review # 4: I know about that in the Kill Order. :) I'm reading that one now. I wrote this, however, shortly after finishing the Scorch Trials.
I appreciate your support!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
this was actually really good. theres one like this in the Kill Order. You nailed it
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This was really touching, and I know that sounds cheesy but that was the best word I could think of. Maybe I'm just weird, and I kinda feel like a bad person, but I never really had a ton of empathy for Thomas or Teresa, maybe because he at least was a little too perfect (then again, he is the main character). This made me really be able to sympathize with them, and visualize how much this would hurt. Terrific job on this!
Jerry Side chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I found you wrote this pretty well. I really like the idea that they're saying goodbye for only a day, but at the same time, it changes everything.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
OMG SO SAD BUT I LOVED IT! :)