Reviews for Possession
shai'lo chapter 26 . 8/10/2015
I loved you're story. it was the BOM
fanfiction91 chapter 26 . 8/10/2015
This story was so fucking hot ! I've read it twice ! God I love Derek's possessiveness towards Pen ! It's fucking awesome and very arousing ! Please come back and write more great stories with this same category of Dom & Sub... You're amazing
shai'lo chapter 26 . 8/2/2015
You're story was the BOM
marthapreston4 chapter 20 . 11/6/2014
okay so I know the main focus of this chapter is supposed to be one the fact that he saved her from kevin but I keep thinking is get to flirt with others and she cant! And his only respond is that she is his favorite. She is the best card in the deck not the only card. And that is so sad that the character thinks she deserves to overlooked and he has rights that she doesnt. Its not fun to be the queen when the king is also screwing all your ladies in waiting
marthapreston4 chapter 18 . 11/6/2014
you your possesiveness and bossy to not allow you partner to have thier own especially if you did something wrong is not a healthy dom/sub relationship or any type
marthapreston4 chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
okay I hate to mention this but it the story Kevin has valid point this your woman thing is a front. If he cared so deeply than she should been his man and should have been sleeping with other people . by having him say that she understood and its okay just sounds like a man who think he is better than her so she has to except that she is favorite girl instead his only girl
marthapreston4 chapter 12 . 11/6/2014
okay went from hot to serial killery
marthapreston4 chapter 7 . 11/6/2014
this is oddly porngraphic and I missing the sweetness that makes the realationship sparkle
arses21 chapter 26 . 10/20/2014
This was so incredible! I loved so many things, but Derek in her NYC hotel room was a favorite! Thanks for sharing:-)
jayjrat chapter 26 . 8/10/2014
This is so amazing! Really great read all the way through :)
Butterfly1993 chapter 26 . 7/22/2014
awwah didnt want it to end i loved it xD
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Dumb Human Like U chapter 6 . 10/9/2013
love it can't wait to see what comes next
litbitnurse87 chapter 26 . 6/17/2013
aaawwww loved it thank you so much
litbitnurse87 chapter 17 . 6/16/2013
0 oh come on ! yay about Tamara that's all I got at the mo can you please give them a break
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